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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Thu Jan 07, 2010 6:51 am
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Ah, another story on the topic of the Dol Amroth ruling family! I've enjoyed all your previous tales, I shall certainly like reading this one. Your portrayal of Imrahil as a young man made me chuckle. Can't wait to read the next chapter!  |
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| Author's replied on Thu Jan 07, 2010 9:50 am |
| Hope you enjoy the story, Malinwen - thanks a lot for reviewing, LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Wed Jan 13, 2010 9:38 am
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| I enjoyed the detailed descriptions in this chapter. I can't wait for the real action to start! And I laughed at the last few lines; I like the young Imrahil very much. Keep up the good work |
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| Author's replied on Wed Jan 13, 2010 1:15 pm |
| The action starts in the next chapter and continues for a few more. Imrahil's relationship with Thorongil does go up and down. Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ |
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stoneflwr1
Joined: 24 Mar 2005
Reviews: 38
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Thu Jan 14, 2010 5:13 pm
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| This is a great start to this story! I loved the first two and am very excited to see where this one goes. |
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| Author's replied on Tue Jan 26, 2010 1:38 pm |
It goes through a lot of exciting times, I hope!
Thanks for reviewing, glad you enjoyed.LBJ |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Tue Jan 19, 2010 2:27 pm
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At the end of chapter three may I just say... Meep!
A fascinating story so far - and sure to get more so, I feel. |
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| Author's replied on Tue Jan 26, 2010 1:40 pm |
I hope it does. A number of chapters of adventure before the romantic bit.
Thanks for reviewing.LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Tue Jan 19, 2010 2:55 pm
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| Meep from me too! Imrahil better act fast. Great chapter, as before |
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| Author's replied on Tue Jan 26, 2010 1:41 pm |
Thanks. I hope I can get him out of all the situation I put him in.
Glad you are still enjoying,LBJ |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Tue Jan 26, 2010 1:31 pm
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| Wow! That was really good exciting stuff - real pace and good plotting. |
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| Author's replied on Tue Jan 26, 2010 1:42 pm |
| Thank you. Planning raids did not come easy to me, but it was fun. LBJ |
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athena568
Joined: 29 Nov 2007
Reviews: 110
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Wed Jan 27, 2010 10:00 pm
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| Good chapter! I'm liking young Imrahil more and more. He's a good man with a conscience and values even on a raid. "If he started murdering children he would be like their enemies." Poor Jibran, if the story about his mother being a prisoner of war and from Belfast. Glad that Imrahil plans to take him home. Next chapter, please! |
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| Author's replied on Thu Jan 28, 2010 2:02 pm |
Well Imrahil came across as a good man in the books, so that is how I always see him.
Next chapter soon. Thanks for reviewing. LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Sat Jan 30, 2010 4:33 am
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| I'm enjoying this story immensely - I always like action-packed chapters, and they're easier for me to write somehow (must be the years of roleplaying on the LOTR Fanatics Plaza speaking through *g* ). Imrahil is a good man - one can see it clearly. Now, let's keep our fingers crossed that Thorongil arrives soon! |
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| Author's replied on Tue Feb 02, 2010 12:57 pm |
| I have to make Imrahil good - as he certainly came across as a real noble man. LBJ |
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athena568
Joined: 29 Nov 2007
Reviews: 110
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Tue Feb 02, 2010 5:24 pm
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| Awesome chapter! Now the small group of boys and the woman are safely aboard, its time to move on to their real goal of destroying those ships. I liked the back and forth discussion as the idea was put forward for helping free the slaves in the port - how will the plan evolve and how will it play out with their other goal in mind? Can't wait to see it happen! |
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| Author's replied on Wed Feb 03, 2010 2:38 pm |
| Well, there are bound to be a few problems, that's what makes it interesting.LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Wed Feb 03, 2010 1:33 pm
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| Another wonderful chapter - I especially liked the dialogue in this one, you really set the mood with it. So now, off to the rescue and raiding mission! |
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| Author's replied on Wed Feb 03, 2010 2:39 pm |
| We are certainly moving into the action now. LBJ |
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