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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Tue Feb 09, 2010 2:38 pm
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| Gosh - exciting stuff - I am most relieved to already know that Imrahil and Thorongil make it - so hopefully the rest will too. |
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| Author's replied on Fri Feb 26, 2010 10:23 am |
| Great you find it exciting, even though we know they survive. LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Wed Feb 10, 2010 3:50 am
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Ah, another cliffhanger! Let's just hope all turns out for the best. Good job  |
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| Author's replied on Fri Feb 26, 2010 10:23 am |
| Thanks, I am sure things will work out. LBJ |
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athena568
Joined: 29 Nov 2007
Reviews: 110
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Mon Feb 22, 2010 6:12 pm
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| Wow, super description of the mission! Chapters 6 &7 were wonderful. So, he finally won over Imrahil but now the Prince doesn't understand why he would just desert everyone and leave Gondor. Look forward to the explanation. Will you end up with Imrahil meeting Aragorn on the fields of Pelennor? It would be cool to glimpse his first thoughts. |
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| Author's replied on Fri Feb 26, 2010 10:26 am |
| Thomas for the nice words. I had not originally intended to write the scene on the Pelennor but having had a few nudges I decided to do that - even though it pushes the romance back a chapter! LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Thu Feb 25, 2010 3:32 pm
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| I can sympathise with Imrahil as Thorongil decides to leave Gondor. But at least they're all safe now and the raid was successful! Nice chapter, can't wait for more |
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| Author's replied on Fri Feb 26, 2010 10:27 am |
| Yes, poor Imrahil doesn't understand and Thorongil can't tell him. Thanks for your reviews. LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Sun Mar 07, 2010 7:30 am
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| Ah, Imrahil should have known Thorongil would be doing some minor scheming of his own! Hehe, I like the idea of returning the book to the lady's companion. Good work, as always, I really enjoyed the dialogue between Imrahil and Thorongil. Can't wait for more |
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| Author's replied on Tue Mar 09, 2010 3:09 pm |
The companion? When the beautiful Lady Mirineth is around! LOL
Thanks a lot for reviewing.LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Fri Mar 19, 2010 10:06 am
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| Ah well, one had to notice the companion too! *g* I enjoyed the way you shifted back and forth between the present day conversation and the story, and now we finally get to meet this mysterious lady everyone seems to want Imrahil to wed! Looking forward to more, |
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| Author's replied on Mon Mar 29, 2010 12:53 pm |
| Thanks. I wanted to break the two parts of the story up as they are quite different. The mysterious lady is coming up. LBJ |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Mon Mar 29, 2010 1:47 pm
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Oh excellent stuff!
Now we must wonder whether he finally weds Aearin or actually does come around to the idea of Mirineth, or even Oriel. And/or does Sergion end up with any of the three? Even does Halien survive to the end of the story without someone braining her...? |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Tue Mar 30, 2010 3:34 am
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| Oh I had quite a laugh with this one, through the quirky comments made by Imrahil out loud or in his mind! I think lady Aearin shall find herself hunted soon, though I wish to see more of Mirineth as well. And Sergion standing up for Oriel was quite sweet. Good job! |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Fri Apr 09, 2010 10:34 am
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| I'm glad Aearin is thawing out ... but the last line made me giggle. 'It's your fault!' Oh dear. Poor Imrahil xD |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Fri Apr 09, 2010 11:38 am
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| Oh dear - poor Imrahil - of course it's all his fault! |
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