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airplane
Joined: 04 Feb 2007
Reviews: 47
Location: a place called home...
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Wed Feb 24, 2010 4:47 pm
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| LOVE! Ohh....she's falling for him. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
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| Author's replied on Thu Feb 25, 2010 3:41 pm |
Hello airplane,
yes, falling for him...hard...  And I'm hoping to have the next chapter ready quite soon.
Thanks for reviewing!
Lia |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Thu Feb 25, 2010 3:30 pm
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I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, they're starting to get along quite well. And now, going with the current, Leona can relax a little too. Can't wait for the next chapter  |
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| Author's replied on Thu Feb 25, 2010 3:43 pm |
Hello Malinwen,
relax? Hmm, we'll see... I've still got a few things up my sleeve to keep the journey interesting and Léona on his toes
Thanks for reviewing!
Lia |
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candylouwho
Joined: 11 Jul 2006
Reviews: 32
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Wed Mar 03, 2010 2:19 pm
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| Well that was exciting! I must admit I almost squealed when he called her his wife. And when she stuffed things in between them to sleep that made me laugh. |
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| Author's replied on Thu Mar 04, 2010 2:22 pm |
Hello candylouwho,
we'll see if those jute bags do their job - or not
Thanks for reviewing!
Lia |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:35 am
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| Well, now three ruffians can say they had the pleasure of meeting a rather dangerous Horselord lol! I really liked this chapter, the way you describe Leona's fast thinking and reflexes really sheds light on his warrior side. The last bit, stuffing the bags between them, made me laugh. Good job! |
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| Author's replied on Thu Mar 04, 2010 2:27 pm |
Hello Malinwen,
I think as far as protection is concerned, Lothiriel definitely picked the right man to abduct. But when they're in a temper I'm not sure who's the more dangerous of those two...
Thanks for reviewing and more news on the jute bags next week!
Lia |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Wed Mar 10, 2010 3:25 pm
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| Oh my! At least he is almost trying to come clean... just not quite managing it! It is always such a pleasure to get the notification of another chapter. |
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| Author's replied on Thu Mar 11, 2010 2:36 pm |
Hello Wombat,
almost coming clean describes it nicely. I'm just not sure if Lothiriel will appreciate his efforts
Thanks for reviewing!
Lia |
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airplane
Joined: 04 Feb 2007
Reviews: 47
Location: a place called home...
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Wed Mar 10, 2010 4:05 pm
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| The plot thickens! Loved this chapter *squee* |
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| Author's replied on Thu Mar 11, 2010 2:37 pm |
Hello airplane,
it's nice to hear you're still enjoying the journey!
Thanks for reviewing.
Lia |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Thu Mar 11, 2010 3:33 am
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| Oh dear! If only she had listened carefully to his stammered I - he; he's trying to come clean, but then how does it feel when she so vehemently refuses to marry the King of Rohan? I think our poor Leona is pretty desperate. Loved this chapter, can't wait for more! |
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| Author's replied on Thu Mar 11, 2010 2:40 pm |
Hello Malinwen,
I'm starting to feel sorry for Léona myself! But then he's got nobody to blame but himself really - okay, having an evil author on his case probably doesn't help And of course he can't know why she objects so vehemently to the idea of marrying the King of Rohan.
Thanks for reviewing!
Lia |
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candylouwho
Joined: 11 Jul 2006
Reviews: 32
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Thu Mar 11, 2010 6:51 pm
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| Yay! "You smell nice." Oh I loved that And he's got quite close to telling her I think so that's exciting! Good job |
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| Author's replied on Fri Mar 12, 2010 2:58 pm |
Hello candylouwho,
the jute bags didn't quite work, did they, but at least she likes the smell of them - or is it the cabbage? And he got close, but not close enough!
Thanks for reviewing.
Lia |
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airplane
Joined: 04 Feb 2007
Reviews: 47
Location: a place called home...
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Thu Mar 18, 2010 12:39 am
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It really is sad how happy I was to see the story update notification in my inbox 
REALLY good chapter! My face hurts from smiling... |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Thu Mar 18, 2010 5:45 am
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| Oh I have a feeling Amrothos won't be in a good mood hehe, or Imrahil, once they get her back. As for the crows ... curse them! Lol. I really enjoyed this chapter; I did notice some typing errors on the way but only minor ones, and if you say your right wrist isn't as it should be then I guess that explains it Can't wait to read more, but you take care and don't over-do it! |
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