Joined: 28 Nov 2003 Reviews: 6
Location: California
Sat Nov 29, 2003 4:25 pm
Extremely cute! A fic with so much youth and delight it made me smile. Well done m'dear!
frodo16424
Joined: 17 Aug 2003 Reviews: 1
Location: Espyville, Pa
Sun Nov 30, 2003 1:14 pm
Very nice story. Especially enjoyed having Bilbo and Gandalf enter the snowball fight. Ezxcellent touch.
Viv
Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Tue Dec 02, 2003 5:56 pm
Wonderfully warm and untterly charming. My mind is full of images of Gandalf tossing snowballs with a bunch of hobbits! Brava! Sam's voice in that brief bit of dialogue was perfect... have you written any other stories with Sam? If not, you should; you have his voice down. And I'd forgotten the hobbit tradition of Yule, but I'm glad you thought of it. The warmth of Bag End and happy hobbits and tea and food... well, these are sorts of things the season is made for. Thank you so much!
ArtanisOrangeBlossom
Joined: 07 Nov 2004 Reviews: 96
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Tue Mar 01, 2005 5:56 am
*giggles* i love young hobbit stories esp. when there's Bilbo involved! *grins* Gandalf is so great and i love how attached he is to the young hobbits. the other Hobbits were adorable but esp. Pip at the end "Mama's gonna have your head on a platter" that was some perfect delivery to wrap the story up. Excellent job