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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Sun Mar 07, 2010 11:27 am
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I want to hug both Inzílani and Borongil for their efforts to each do the best for the other that they can,or know how. Intelligent girl to begin to learn the language. Perhaps in time, if she finally learns enough Sindarin, she can explain why the other former captives don't approve of her!
I want to hug Aerwen too - for such a good chapter to such a fascinating tale. |
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| Author's replied on Thu Mar 11, 2010 11:42 am |
Thanks! How did you know I like hugs?  Inzilanî is a very strong person to have survived this long, and intelligent as well. I'm glad you like her as much as I do. |
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RunnerBeast
Joined: 01 May 2004
Reviews: 19
Location: WA
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Thu Mar 11, 2010 2:53 am
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| I'm enjoying the last chapters, I enjoy reading about Inzilani's healing journey. I love how you write the elves. |
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| Author's replied on Thu Mar 11, 2010 11:43 am |
| I'm glad you're enjoying this. Inzilanî has a long way to go to find healing yet. So hang on, the bumpy ride is just getting started. |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Sun Mar 14, 2010 9:23 am
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Poor Inzilanî with her nightmares - and Borongil singing her feet down kinder dream paths is just how I imagine it to be.
I can imagine the shock of waking beside what looks like a very elegant corpse, too.
Revenge on the Uruk might help her - I hope it does. |
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| Author's replied on Tue Mar 16, 2010 9:52 pm |
| Thanks for writing. Yes, waking up next to what looks like a dead man must be shocking. And as for the uruk, well... Disturbing verbal imagery ahead. |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Sat Mar 20, 2010 5:10 pm
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Poor child, poor, poor child. And yet this is exactly right - it is what they would have done, and what she would have felt afterwards.
Incredibly strongly written chapter - it must have been quite gut-wrenching to write, well done. |
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| Author's replied on Tue Mar 23, 2010 11:43 am |
| No, it wasn't the easiest chapter to write. That kind of rage, when it explodes, gets very ugly - and does ugly things to the ones who've been holding it in all that time. Thanks for the review. |
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Daniel
Joined: 29 May 2008
Reviews: 86
Location: Pinole
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Sat Mar 27, 2010 7:21 pm
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Inzilani deserves some TLC. Even though it is confusing now, hopefully it gets easier for her. Thanks for wonderful update...
Daniel |
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| Author's replied on Mon Mar 29, 2010 1:33 pm |
| Thanks, Daniel. While life isn't quite finished dealing her shocks yet, I agree she deserves some TLC. Whether she appreciates it as such is yet to be seen, however. Glad you're enjoying this. |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Mon Mar 29, 2010 10:34 am
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| Well done you for giving him a wife. Are they now in the stronghold of King Thranduil in Mirkwood? |
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| Author's replied on Mon Mar 29, 2010 1:34 pm |
| Well, considering that he's thousands of years older than she is, it stands to reason that he might have found a mate already. She's in for a few more shocks yet too. And yes, they're at Thranduil's halls now. Thanks for writing, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story. |
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Daniel
Joined: 29 May 2008
Reviews: 86
Location: Pinole
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Sat Apr 03, 2010 7:46 pm
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| I think after Inzilani starts to recover from her horrors of being a slave to Orcs, she is going to discover what being loved, just for being her, is like. Thanks for the great chapter....Daniel |
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| Author's replied on Sun Apr 11, 2010 9:38 pm |
| Hi Daniel! Inzilanî has a few more bumps in the road to get past to begin understanding what it means to be living with the Elves. Hang in there. Thanks for writing! |
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Daniel
Joined: 29 May 2008
Reviews: 86
Location: Pinole
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Sun Apr 18, 2010 9:27 am
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| Sounds like trouble is brewing in Inzilani's mind. Now is the time you would hope an interpreter would show up. Not knowing the customs or what happened to the others, her fear, for her, is real.. Great chapter.....Daniel |
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| Author's replied on Mon Apr 19, 2010 7:48 pm |
| Thanks, Daniel. Although the language barrier is going to start dropping, her misunderstandings will take time to come out and be dealt with. Glad you're enjoying this. |
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Daniel
Joined: 29 May 2008
Reviews: 86
Location: Pinole
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Sat Apr 24, 2010 10:33 pm
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| What a heartbreaking chapter. Hopefully, Inzilani can now start to get the help she needs. Is it just me or does it sound like she is in Lothlorien now? Thanks for the great chapter...Daniel |
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| Author's replied on Sun Apr 25, 2010 12:01 am |
| Hi Daniel! No, she's not in Lothlórien now - remember the faces looking down at her and Borongil when she first arrived? She's in one of those telain. Thanks for writing! |
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Daniel
Joined: 29 May 2008
Reviews: 86
Location: Pinole
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Mon Apr 26, 2010 3:16 pm
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| Woops! Sorry about that. Sometimes my fingers type before my mind kicks in. I remember the talans now. So Sorry... |
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| Author's replied on Wed Apr 28, 2010 3:23 pm |
| Not a problem. Mirkwood isn't exactly known for its telain, so it was an understandable mistake. |
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