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Daniel
Joined: 29 May 2008
Reviews: 86
Location: Pinole
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Mon May 03, 2010 12:09 pm
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| I'm glad Inzilani is healing. But it seems that another misunderstanding is going to rear it's ugly head. Can't wait for the next chapter, thanks.....Daniel |
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| Author's replied on Sun May 09, 2010 5:14 pm |
| Yea, misunderstandings can come out of nowhere, it seems. The culture clash continues. Glad you're enjoying this. |
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Daniel
Joined: 29 May 2008
Reviews: 86
Location: Pinole
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Sun May 09, 2010 2:51 pm
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| Okay, I didn't see that coming! Poor Inzilani is going to be more confused now, what was Bronamar thinking? I think he is more attached to her than he is willing to believe. I hope this works ok, but I have a bad feeling...... |
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| Author's replied on Sun May 09, 2010 5:15 pm |
| Bronamar fumbled the ball here, for certain. Then again, each expected such different things from something as simple as a "dance". Hang in there. Thanks for writing! |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Sat May 15, 2010 2:49 pm
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| What a lovely, healing, chapter. |
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| Author's replied on Mon May 17, 2010 3:54 pm |
| It is about time for things to start to make sense to her, isn't it? And fitting that Borongil is the one who finally breaks through her stubborn vision of what her life is to be. Thanks for reading! |
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Daniel
Joined: 29 May 2008
Reviews: 86
Location: Pinole
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Sat May 15, 2010 10:47 pm
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| Finally, some peace for Inzilani. I hope.....lol. Wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed her light bulb moment. Thanks and I can't wait for the next chapter....Daniel |
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| Author's replied on Mon May 17, 2010 3:55 pm |
| Yea, it was time for Inzilanî to start making the right connections at last. And despite the move to the talan, Borongil was the one who always made the breakthroughs with her. We're almost done now - only an epilogue to go. Thanks for your support, Daniel. You have no idea how much it means! |
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ElenaTiriel
Joined: 17 Mar 2004
Reviews: 132
Location: The Grey Havens
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Sat May 22, 2010 3:31 pm
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Ah, so Inzilanî has settled in comfortably with the Elves.... good! And now she even knows how Elves celebrate! And she and Bronamar have reached a comfort level that they can tease each other.
This was a really interesting story, Aearwen. I honestly never knew what to expect next... which is as it should be, for a story whose theme is cultural misunderstandings.
Very nicely done! Thank you for sharing it with us....
- Barbara |
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| Author's replied on Fri May 28, 2010 1:51 pm |
| Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. |
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Daniel
Joined: 29 May 2008
Reviews: 86
Location: Pinole
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Sat May 22, 2010 4:15 pm
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| What a fantstic epilogue! After all her ups and downs,Inzilani gets to enjoy some well deserved peace. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story!! .....Daniel |
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| Author's replied on Fri May 28, 2010 1:52 pm |
| Thank YOU, Daniel. Your support along the way is very much appreciated. I'm glad this story had a satisfactory ending for you. |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Sat May 22, 2010 4:55 pm
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| What a good ending - thank you so much for this story. |
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| Author's replied on Fri May 28, 2010 1:53 pm |
| Thank you too, for your reviews. I'm glad you liked it. |
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