Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
Tue Apr 13, 2010 3:56 am
Apart from perhaps a quick-paced paragraph that seemed unnatural against the dialogue, I found this story very sweet and entertaining you've captured Arwen's bitterness on her choice perfectly, and I was very pleased to read about Galadriel's thoughts on the matter. It's refreshing to have someone else besides Elrond reflect on Arwen's choice. The illustrations on your website are fabulous the artist has great skill.
Author's replied on Wed Apr 14, 2010 11:23 pm
Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm delighted you enjoyed my story and have passed your kind comments about her lovely artwork on to Rachel. I'll read the story through again to see if I can fix the pacing problems.. I've always had a soft spot for Galadriel as for some reason she interests me more than Elrond.