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napali
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Fri Apr 23, 2010 3:17 pm
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| Hi. I love the story so far, your style of writing is beautiful. And I love it even more since Maedhros is my favorite character in Tolkien's world. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapters. Keep up the good work. |
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| Author's replied on Fri Apr 23, 2010 8:29 pm |
Thank you! Glad you like it. Hope you keep enjoying. I'll update asap.  |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
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Mon Apr 26, 2010 6:17 am
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This is similar to another story about Maedhros I read a while back, but with such a unique style! I've enjoyed the chapters so far and I'll surely enjoy the rest as well  |
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| Author's replied on Mon Apr 26, 2010 8:48 am |
Thank you! Hope you'll keep liking it.  |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
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Fri Apr 30, 2010 1:58 am
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Oooh a secret cave! I loved it you write beautifully, I only noticed one typo somewhere where a key hadn't been pressed enough, but that was it. Maedhros is very gallant. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
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| Author's replied on Fri Apr 30, 2010 7:17 am |
Thank you! Yep, sometimes my keyboard jams. Sorry, must have missed iit while re-reading. Well, hope you keep enjoying! |
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napali
Joined: 04 Apr 2008 Reviews: 19
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Tue May 04, 2010 12:13 am
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| Very beautiful. I like Silme very much, she is perfect for Maitimo. I can't wait to read about their life together, tragic as it will be (especially in Beleriand). I really hope you will write their story until the end. I love what you wrote so far. Thank you. |
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| Author's replied on Tue May 04, 2010 12:26 am |
| Thank you! I very much hope to get to the end myself. Hope you keep enjoying! |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
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Thu May 06, 2010 1:45 am
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Ah, he finally asked! Loving the story so far, can't wait to see it unfold  |
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| Author's replied on Thu May 06, 2010 7:15 am |
Thank you! I'm very glad you like it, and hope you keep enjoying the story.  |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
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Sat May 08, 2010 1:35 am
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| Oh dear, it begins. This was one of the saddest stories in the Silmarillion to me, so I'm preparing myself now *g*. But I really enjoy your writing style. |
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| Author's replied on Sat May 08, 2010 4:28 am |
Thanks! Yep, it isn't an easy story to write. But glad you're liking it.  |
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napali
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Sat May 15, 2010 11:08 pm
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| Hi. Beautiful chapter. I liked Silme's mother as well as Artanis's wisdom. Now I'm looking forward to the meeting with Feanaro and Nerdanel and the rest of the family. I'm still loving very much your writing. Thank you. |
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| Author's replied on Sun May 16, 2010 6:22 am |
Thanks to you! Yep, the Feanarions are the next in row. High time for Feanor to return from his journey and see what everybody's been up to.  |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
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Mon May 17, 2010 1:24 am
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Ah, the father. I enjoyed this chapter, as the others I like how when you describe the characters, you don't give unnecessary detail, but still the whole picture presents itself nicely. Now I'm looking forward to seeing your take on Nerdanel and the Noldo.  |
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| Author's replied on Mon May 17, 2010 6:51 am |
Thank you! I'll be updating asap.  |
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napali
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Thu May 20, 2010 9:29 pm
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| Splendid chapter. I like very much your description of Nerdanel, pretty much as I imagined her. I can't wait now for Feanaro's reaction to the news. Beautiful writing. Thank you. |
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| Author's replied on Thu May 20, 2010 9:39 pm |
Thanks to you! Can't wait to write Feanor too. |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
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Fri May 21, 2010 5:55 am
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Again, I'm amazed by your writing style. I've enjoyed Nerdanel, the High King and his High Queen, but am very much looking forward to the firstborn Prince.  |
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| Author's replied on Fri May 21, 2010 8:55 am |
Is there somebody who does not love Feanor? Glad you like it! Thank you for your reviews. |
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