Reviews for "Tainted Light"

Fri May 28, 2010 11:04 pm

Hi. Splendid description of Feanaro. I feel sorry for Maitimo and the constant comparison with his father that is very likely that happened in his life in Valinor and probably afterwards. Now I'm looking forward to the next years of the relationship, maybe even the wedding (if it's happening before the destruction of the Trees, after all many things can happen in ten years even in Aman). Beautiful writing as always. Thank you.

Sat May 29, 2010 2:46 am

Ah, finally! I've enjoyed your description of Finwe's firstborn; like music. I'm sorry for Maedhros though, especially because he is so often compaired to his father. But at least they have the consent, although what will come to pass in ten years time ... we shall see. Lovely, as ever! Can't wait for more Smile smiley face

Mon Jun 07, 2010 11:37 am

Hi. Another beautiful chapter. I wonder about Findekano's attitude towards Silme and I hope that you will give us a reason for that in a future chapter. And from the discussion at the end between Maitimo and Silme I guess that the things that lead to the rebellion are put in motion. I also wonder if they will get wedded in Aman or later in Beleriand. I'm very much looking forward to the next chapters. Thank you.

Mon Jun 07, 2010 4:05 pm

And darkness gathers over Valinor, and Tirion upon fair Tuna. *sigh* But, enough of that! I really enjoyed this chapter, as those previously, you capture the characters, and the Elven grace, with such skill that I feel like a little child when I look at my own stories. I did see some typing mistakes here and there, but nothing major Smile smiley face

Wed Jun 16, 2010 1:18 pm

Oh dear. We knew this would happen - but how will our protagonist choose? Poor Silme and Maitimo! This was a great chapter, it captured all the emotions clearly. I can't wait to read more Smile smiley face

Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:03 pm

This indeed was a dark chapter. I always felt sorry for Maitimo (and his brothers) for being caught in his father madness. I feel sorry for Silme too for having to make such a difficult choice, but Maitimo is right, there is no escape from Feanaro (not even after his death). I can't wait the next chapters now that we getting closer to the peak of events in Valinor. Superb writing as usual. Thank you

Fri Jun 18, 2010 1:18 am

There was darkness, but instead of fighting the writing opressive, I enjoyed it. You really capture the essence of Feanor's story, even if he's just a shadow hovering over Maitimo and Silme. Great job! And congrats on the nomination, you certainly deserve it Smile smiley face

Fri Jun 18, 2010 12:44 pm

An update so soon! Hooray! I hope it will happen again "g". Sad but beautiful chapter. Of course I'm glad that she chose as she did. Now to see how her life in Formenos will be until the Darkening. Thank you.

Mon Jun 28, 2010 6:02 am

I'm happy for Silme and Maitimo for now, at least they have some happiness in them Smile smiley face

great chapter, as always, looking forward to more!

Mon Jun 28, 2010 1:21 pm

Hi. Beautiful chapter. I love your description of Feanaro's feelings toward Silme. Now I am very curious when you will have Maitimo and Silme wed. Things will be moving faster from now on (the darkening is only a few days away after all). I'm very much looking forward to the next chapters. Wonderful writing as always. Thank you.

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