Reviews for "Invictus"

Mon May 17, 2010 6:35 am

An excellent beginning to a very difficult time in one families' life. That Celebrian even survived such an attack speaks of her own strength. I like the allusions to others who have held her heart over so many thousands of years. Of course one would recall the good memories to try to ward off the horrible ones. You paint an amazing picture where she so obviously loves Elrohir, but there are so many other factors. 'look forward to more.

Tue Jan 25, 2011 2:28 am

I really love your writing style - makes me fall into the story effortlessly. The 'Semper Fi' addition was a nice touch, it speaks for itself. Everyone in this story seems to carry one wound or another, but I think the essence is in the leaf medallion - very good. Looking forward to more ^^

Wed Dec 14, 2011 1:05 pm

I have not read much on elves but enforced rest saw me trawling through the archives. I am so glad I found this - great story and masterly writing.LBJ

Mon Jan 02, 2012 4:46 pm

Good chapter - and great portrayal of the relationship between Elrohir and Gilrean. LBJ

Mon Jan 16, 2012 1:10 pm

Lovely mix of description and action. I must admit all the way through I was thinking -where is Aragorn? LBJ

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