Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Fri Jun 11, 2010 9:31 pm
Wow, Breemom, this is a really interesting and provocative drabble, and a wonderfully surprising interpretation of the challenge. Excellent.
Author's replied on Wed Jun 23, 2010 1:14 am
Thanks for the feedback. Much appreciated
I love to hear what I'm doing right almost as much as what I can do better.
A million thanks for helping my quest for becoming a better writer.
RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Tue Mar 01, 2011 3:39 pm
Oh, nice. You've packed a lot into a small drabble -- from the details of the description at the beginning, to the concluding lline. Very well done and interesting. Thank you for sharing.