Reviews for "Namaarie, Mellon nin"

Mon Dec 01, 2003 5:44 pm

Excellent piece. Thank you!

Mon Dec 29, 2003 10:03 am

This was wonderful.

I love what I read, thank you.

Sivan Cool smiley face

Tue Apr 13, 2004 5:07 am

Short fic but sweet and sad and hopeful at the same time, thanks!

Sat May 22, 2004 10:37 am

wow! That was an amazing masterpiece! Very Happy smiley face

Thu Jun 24, 2004 6:25 am

This was short but so poignant, your use of language has perfectly captured the emotion of the moment, very well written.

Wed Aug 11, 2004 8:38 am

Beutifully sad. Short but very meaningful. Thankyou Very Happy smiley face

Wed Aug 11, 2004 8:39 am

Beutifully sad. Short but very meaningful. Thankyou Very Happy smiley face

Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:53 pm

Nicely done.

I do feel that the breaks in the poem about halfway through are awkward because of the flow. And, there is a problem with this line:

As he turned to go, he realized he was holding something was in his hand.

Otherwise, I like this a lot.

Thank you for sharing.

rous

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