Reviews for "Promises to Keep"

Tue Dec 02, 2003 5:44 pm

What a wonderful, original, well written piece! Smile smiley face

I commend the author for bringing us such finery! The POV was also done well and was not confusing at all.

Tue Feb 17, 2004 7:10 pm

Wow your story blew me away with its magnificence!!! The way you handled the point of view was simply brilliant because I had no clue until almost the very end whose eyes the story was being told from. And when I figured it out, I was floored in disbelief and awe. Surprised smiley face

Thu Dec 23, 2004 12:55 am

I read this before, and cannot for the life of me remember why I did not comment on it. It is a very well done piece. Thank you for sharing it.

Thu Dec 23, 2004 8:13 am

So poignant and beautifully written.

Thu Dec 23, 2004 4:17 pm

This is an excellent idea for a story, well executed. You have some lovely turns of phrase - 'thicket of spears' and 'funeral incense' (sorry, can't recall exactly). You might consider editing "phyrric:" it's so specific to Roman history it threw me out a little.

Sat Dec 03, 2005 7:41 pm

I read this once again. It is still as poignant as the first time. I do want to comment on the POV, though. I do not know why I did not comment on it before. I did not realize who was "speaking" until it became painfully obvious to me. LOL Very well done. I like taking things from the POV most unexpected myself. It does tend to throw other off a bit. Again, very well done and thank you for sharing.

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