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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004
Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
Tue Oct 12, 2010 5:58 pm

Wow. Tough subject, tough situation. I was unclear if this was a chapter or a one shot, but you managed to work in nuances of both backstory and foreshadowing.
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Mon Oct 18, 2010 3:30 am

O! Angsty and well written. Good stuff! Thank you for sharing Smile smiley face
 
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