Wow. Tough subject, tough situation. I was unclear if this was a chapter or a one shot, but you managed to work in nuances of both backstory and foreshadowing.
RobinKa
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Mon Oct 18, 2010 3:30 am
O! Angsty and well written. Good stuff! Thank you for sharing