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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Fri Nov 26, 2010 11:53 am
These are wonderfully composed. You very skillfully compared the details of both stories and depicted the moments of Glorfindel's and Ecthelion's tragic deaths in the most evocative way. Great phrasing. I loved: "The fountains sighed in the silence." in particular.

Beautiful and very moving. Thank you for sharing!
 
Author's replied on Fri Nov 26, 2010 2:46 pm
Thanks so much for the positive feedback, I was never too sure about these so its quite crazy they seem to be going down so well! Thanks again!
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
Fri Nov 26, 2010 4:55 pm
I have developed something of a soft spot for Ecthelion - it is nice to see him get equal billing!
 
Author's replied on Sat Nov 27, 2010 3:59 am
Thats what I felt, oddly enough he was much easier to write as well so I'm even more attached to him now! Thanks for the review Smile smiley face
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