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RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Fri Dec 24, 2010 7:52 am
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Oh, poor Glorfindel. You've conveyed his helplessness and her annoyance very well. Nice start  I'm looking forward to reading more. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Dec 27, 2010 1:48 pm |
| Thanks for the review! This is all churning over in my mind quite easily so hopefully it won't take me too long to post the rest. |
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RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Sat Jan 15, 2011 12:00 pm
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Oh the image of Aredhel looking as aurora borealis is breathtaking. And the slip, hehe -- very nice and indeed warm. Like a glimpse at an inviting camp fire in a sea of cold nothingness.
Good stuff! |
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| Author's replied on Sat Jan 15, 2011 5:41 pm |
| I'm glad you got the Northern Lights reference heh, I was wondering if I'd pull it off or not! As ever, thanks for the review! |
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RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:27 am
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Oh, you've packed a lot here: Glorfindel's weariness and need to find Aredhel in spite of it, and grief, worry, disbelief and hurt. At that moment, they could have hope yet, the hope that they weren't betrayed. *sigh* Lovely conclusion of the chapter.
Great, as always Thank you. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Feb 14, 2011 7:29 am |
| And yet again, thank you! |
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RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Mon Mar 14, 2011 2:53 am
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Aaah, Glorfindel you idiot! She couldn't have been more obvious. Ecthelion should have shaken some sense into his "inebriated" friend.
Well done! |
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| Author's replied on Mon Mar 14, 2011 3:33 am |
| Thank you! |
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RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Thu Apr 07, 2011 9:47 am
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This was heart-breaking.
Thank you for a beautiful story. |
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| Author's replied on Thu Apr 07, 2011 3:03 pm |
| Ahh, thank you very much for the review! And thanks for constantly following this and reviewing it - much appreciated. |
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curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Thu Apr 07, 2011 1:51 pm
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| Ah - poor Glorfindel. These are all so well written and work really well now that the set is complete. |
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| Author's replied on Thu Apr 07, 2011 3:06 pm |
| Thanks for your review, they all probably should have been published at the same time for the story to really ring true but I wanted to put something up chapter by chapter for a change! |
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SilvaraDragontear
Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Reviews: 6
Location: In my fort of books
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Mon Apr 11, 2011 5:59 am
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This was a beautiful story and I think you captured Glorfindels emotions over the whole situation with Turgons sister perfectly.
I wonder if the fall of Gondolin would have happen if Glofindel hadn't feeling doubts about what Aredhel felt for him and if he been a bit braver and confronted her about it.
To bad that Aredhel was a lady in that fact and didn't tell Glorfy straight out that she liked him or clubbed him over the head and dragged him back to her lair like a cavewoman, maybe he would´have an easier time of understanding what she was trying to tell him if she had done it that way. |
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| Author's replied on Tue Apr 12, 2011 2:47 am |
| Thanks very much for your review, I'm glad you enjoyed this story so much! |
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