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Thevina
Joined: 20 Nov 2003 Reviews: 31
Location: U.S.
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Tue Dec 30, 2003 1:59 pm
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| What an exquisite story. Poignant, heart-rending, ultimately wonderfully *real.* Truly a beautiful vignette. Thank you for writing it! |
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eirwen
Joined: 26 Nov 2003 Reviews: 26
Location: UK
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Tue Jan 13, 2004 4:41 pm
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| Exquisite. Evocative. Human - or should I say hobbit-like. Neatly and empathetically conjours up the back story through the youthful POV. It spoke to me. thank you. |
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Mon Feb 23, 2004 8:14 am
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| Lovely and superb. |
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Hathor

Joined: 10 Jun 2003 Reviews: 52
Location: Lancashire, England
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Mon Feb 23, 2004 1:27 pm
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Spectacular. I can think of no other words to describe this lovely, lovely piece of writing. Fits perfectly the characters and the one doing the telling.
Thank you so much for sharing! |
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Andreth
Joined: 25 Oct 2003 Reviews: 107
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Mon Feb 23, 2004 2:44 pm
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| This is wonderful. You've captured the inquisitiveness of a child and portrayed the child-like fear at finding that some folk tales are very real. You told the tale very well from a young girl's point of view, showing Merry through her eyes. Excellent job. |
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Ariel

Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 48
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Sun Apr 04, 2004 6:40 pm
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| Oh, marvellous! Very true to character and a delightful read. Brought a tear to my eye too. I always loved stories about the last days of Merry and Pippin. So sad and yet so right an end. *sob* You have done a masterful job! |
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SamwiseTheStrong
Joined: 27 Feb 2004 Reviews: 52
Location: Oregon, USA
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Thu Dec 16, 2004 2:00 am
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| Our Merry would be proud to know that his story is in such capable hands. I myself bow to you *bows*. This is a lovely story and you seem to have mastered the character beautifully. Thanks for the joy!! :} |
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JayofLasgalen
Joined: 16 Aug 2003 Reviews: 2
Location: Devon, England
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Thu Dec 16, 2004 9:43 am
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What a lovely tale, and one I'd have missed if it hadn't been featured on the front page. I liked the way you included Merry's scar on his forehead.
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ViJanaway

Joined: 07 May 2004 Reviews: 78
Location: Near Dallas, Texas
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Thu Dec 16, 2004 10:10 pm
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A loving, gentle, tale. So very nice to see the continuation.  |
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Merlynnod
Joined: 27 Dec 2004 Reviews: 1
Location: East Tennessee
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Mon Dec 27, 2004 4:36 am
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Oh my...Lovely, beautiful, heartbreaking story! I know that feeling...of being the only girl (or in my case simply the oldest, though also one of only 2 girl granchildren) and that special bond with a grandfather.
Your prose was just that, truly poetic and beautiful, perfectly capturing the mood and the dailiness of life, especially life as a child.
Beautiful, beautiful story.
And the ending...those who sailed too soon...That shore can be an awfully cold and lonely place...but there is always the hope of what or more truly who, lie beyond the farthest horizon.
Incredible story...  |
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