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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
Mon May 30, 2011 5:24 pm

Wow! That's a really exciting chapter.
 
Author's replied on Mon Jun 06, 2011 5:58 am
Oh good, I am really glad you thought so. Thanks. LBJ
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
Wed Jun 15, 2011 2:37 pm

<<‘Devoran, is there something of mine in there?’>>

I should sincerely hope so!

And what an excellent chapter.
 
Author's replied on Mon Jun 20, 2011 1:51 pm
Thank you. I don't think Amroth would have any doubts. LBJ
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
Fri Jun 17, 2011 7:21 am

Ah, I hate exams when they attack me full force. I've only just caught up with this story, and loving it of course! I especially enjoyed Amroth's last line. He's amazing. Can't wait to read more!
 
Author's replied on Mon Jun 20, 2011 1:51 pm
Hope your exams went well. I am rather fond of Amroth as well. LBJ
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
Wed Jun 29, 2011 10:43 am

Oh wow! I am very taken with Erchirion marrying like that! And Calaerdis' proposal - good woman.
 
Author's replied on Wed Jul 13, 2011 8:18 am
Imrahil got his way in the end - as soon as he backed off! LBJ
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
Wed Jul 13, 2011 2:12 pm

:~) Well it's an unusual way to get a wife... I am all agog waiting for Erchirion trying to get a word in edgewise as Lothiriel berates him for marrying Inayah without giving the woman the option. Before she actually finds out whether he gave her the option or not...!
 
Author's replied on Wed Jul 20, 2011 12:14 pm
Yes, Lothy has jumped right in hasn't she. No doubt she will learn more. LBJ
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
Wed Jul 13, 2011 2:32 pm

My exams went well, thank you Smile smiley face and oh, the last son married! Now this I have to see - poor Erchi, I have a feeling he might not get a word out while his sister rants lol!
 
Author's replied on Wed Jul 20, 2011 12:15 pm
Someone is going to get a rant! LBJ
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
Fri Jul 29, 2011 12:48 pm

Ha! I had more faith in Erchirion than his sister did...!
 
Author's replied on Thu Aug 04, 2011 12:30 pm
She just didn't stop to think. A trait she has! LBJ
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
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Sun Aug 07, 2011 5:13 am

Don't we all love Lothi when she gets a bit carried away? I like the portrayal of Erchirion. The warrior who can actually be sensitive. Very nice!
 
Author's replied on Mon Aug 15, 2011 3:56 pm
Well, there had to be a soft side in there somewhere. Great you are still reading and reviewing. Thanks. LBJ
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
Sat Aug 20, 2011 5:53 am

I'm loving the many different aspects of LOTR culture you touch with this story - and of course, we can't wait to see what the bride looks like! Inayah seems perfect for Erchirion, but he's in for one big surprise baby-wise xD Excellent, as always Smile smiley face
 
Author's replied on Mon Aug 22, 2011 9:27 am
Just a little bit about the wedding as we are moving on. I do hope you continue to enjoy, Thanks so much for taking the time to review. LBJ
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008
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Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
Sat Aug 27, 2011 11:12 am

Ah - I had wondered a couple of times, after the glimpse I think I remember of Guleth on one later occasion, about her child. Now I am all agog as to how you have the Rohirrim treat illegitimate children - although I would guess he might be seen, officially, as the child of her dead husband.

I am, greedily, looking forward to the next chapter already.
 
Author's replied on Wed Aug 31, 2011 8:46 am
I suppose an illegitimate child could been seen differently by different people. The next chapters will will reveal all. Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ
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