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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
Sun Aug 28, 2011 12:22 am

As always, amazing. I really love the thought you put in all the families and the children. But now, oh my! Another son for Eomer. I'm looking forward to see how they all deal with this. Can't wait to read more Smile smiley face
 
Author's replied on Wed Aug 31, 2011 8:47 am
The children pop up so I have to keep tabs on them! Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
Fri Sep 02, 2011 1:49 pm

Oh! Oh! Another chapter - and what a good one, too. I am fascinated to find out what happens now.
 
Author's replied on Wed Sep 07, 2011 1:17 pm
Yes, Guleth is in for a surprise. LBJ
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
Sat Sep 03, 2011 12:13 am

'There's no doubt where he comes from too' love that - and I felt like looking at mini-Eomer! Very good chapter, looking forward to see how this evolves.
 
Author's replied on Wed Sep 07, 2011 1:18 pm
I just had to make him look like Eomer! LBJ
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
Sun Sep 11, 2011 7:23 am

Oh how much fear the past phrase might strike in the man - depending on just how he sees the possible ways that Kings might deal with their children conceived out of wedlock!
 
Author's replied on Thu Sep 22, 2011 4:50 am
Difficult decisions for Deor to make. He has to think what his king would want.LBJ
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:41 pm

Deor's son ... poor Deor, that was quite something to blink at like an owl! Loving every new chapter, can't wait to read more Smile smiley face
 
Author's replied on Thu Sep 22, 2011 4:50 am
Yes, I had to put that one in! LBJ
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
Thu Sep 22, 2011 4:42 pm

Oh dear - heartbreak and joy in differing quantities all round - which is why this is such a well-written tale, of course. It is only right that there is no simple solution to this problem that makes everyone instantly happy. Deor did the best he possibly could.
 
Author's replied on Wed Oct 05, 2011 9:46 am
I am glad you thought so.

Please excuse the wait your will have for an update - more hospital treatment for me. LBJ
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
Fri Sep 23, 2011 4:17 am

Deor should win a prize for negotiating this the way he did - masterfully! Loving it, as always Smile smiley face
 
Author's replied on Wed Oct 05, 2011 9:47 am
Thank you.

Sorry that the next instalment will be a while as I have to have another op. LBJ
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
Sun Oct 23, 2011 4:42 pm

Good for Lothiriel! I do hope her plan works.
 
Author's replied on Sun Oct 23, 2011 11:41 pm
Thanks for reading. My apologies as there were many mistakes in this - I uploaded the uncorrected chapter by mistake! LBJ
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
Fri Oct 28, 2011 11:48 pm

The next chapter! I hope things are alright on your end. Loving Lothiriel's idea, but somehow I don't think the two teenagers will get off just so easily in the wild. Bring it on xD
 
Author's replied on Sat Oct 29, 2011 7:50 am
I am fine, thanks. And you are right - they will have to have something to deal with. LBJ
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
Thu Nov 10, 2011 1:43 pm

What an exciting chapter - well done those two young men; I'm sure they will be much better friends at the end of all this.
 
Author's replied on Thu Nov 17, 2011 7:50 am
That's certainly the idea. Glad I managed to make it exciting. Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ
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