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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Wed Mar 02, 2011 3:39 pm

What a wonderful, touching story. The idea that some of the elves might have felt caged in Valinor rings true. Beautifully done! Thank you for sharing Smile smiley face
 
Author's replied on Wed Mar 02, 2011 8:06 pm
Thank Olorime for having a birthday and Morthoron for having a discussion with me about time moving more slowly in Lothlorien. That made me wonder if that was such a great thing.

I'm glad you liked this! Smile smiley face
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ElenaTiriel

Joined: 17 Mar 2004
Reviews: 132
Location: The Grey Havens
Wed Mar 02, 2011 5:05 pm

Ah, so Hal and Jane *did* get married! Ex-cell-ent!!!!

This is a lovely vignette, Jael. I particularly like the idea of Thranduil planting the golden rain tree, just like he remodelled the stables into an artist's loft for Posey. He is always so generous....

You know, I never was into Haldir as a sex object very much, but your story where Jane met him left all sorts of intriguing possibilities.... and I'm so glad they played out the way I'd hoped!

And you give depth to his backstory, of not feeling useful in the Undying Lands. Very nicely done!

- Barbara

P.S. Have you seen the picture in the HASA Resources Library entry for Laurelin? It's at <henneth-annun.net/resources/things_view.cfm?thid=391>.
 

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Last edited by ElenaTiriel on Wed Mar 02, 2011 5:32 pm
Author's replied on Wed Mar 02, 2011 8:36 pm
I was never much into Haldir either. But in this story he's like the big cats he talks about. He's kind of spooky -- he'll break someone's camera or point a gun at someone to protect his boss. Someone like that woulde have been bored to tears in Valinor.

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mollyc
Joined: 25 May 2009
Reviews: 1
Location: north Italy
Fri Mar 04, 2011 3:26 am

I've not read the other story but this one make my hearth cry. So so beutiful

Thank you

Cris
 
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