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RobinKa

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Thu Aug 04, 2011 1:50 pm

Lovely beginning of another intriguing tale in your Return!verse Smile smiley face I'm looking forward to reading more. Thank you.
 
Author's replied on Thu Aug 04, 2011 4:45 pm
Thank you - I should be able to post the next chapter in a few days - I am away from home at the moment - but there is wifi....
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RobinKa

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Mon Aug 08, 2011 3:04 pm

That was beautifully written. Too sad for words, I'll just keep silent for a moment.
 
Author's replied on Mon Aug 08, 2011 4:36 pm
I'm rather afraid that the whole tale is going to be quite melancholy - but it will have the odd bright moment, I promise.
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RobinKa

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Fri Aug 12, 2011 1:59 am

I think the saddest part the relationship between humans and elves (be it friendship or love) is that the elves (and not-quite-elves too) will forever remember, until the world is remade. You've conveyed sadness and pain very well here. Poor Tinu, though. *weeps*

Great stuff Smile smiley face
 
Author's replied on Fri Aug 12, 2011 4:36 am
I think it's why the elves began to withdraw to start with - caring for the mortals just brings more and more loss.

And yes - lessons on how to die were certainly not something Tindómë ever saw herself giving!
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RobinKa

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Thu Aug 18, 2011 2:33 pm

This new chapter got me teary. But, it's nice to know there's someone Legolas has been waiting for. Smile smiley face

Very well done. Thanks for the update!
 
Author's replied on Thu Aug 18, 2011 6:11 pm
There is, indeed, someone - but they might take a while to reach a proper understanding...
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RobinKa

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Fri Aug 26, 2011 1:36 am

Probably the first time ever that an elf, asked a personal question, had given a straight answer – but in this case a bit of elaboration might have helped.

Ah those pesky elves, you'll never know with them. Wink smiley face

Lovely stuff!
 
Author's replied on Fri Aug 26, 2011 2:26 am
They just do it to annoy....

On a side-note, I am going to go back to put a footnote on the chapter 'Strangers in Time and Place' to link to a scene which answers the question of 'What did Galanthir do to keep Legolas from melancholy?' I can't post the scene here as there is mention of possible m/m contact in it.
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RobinKa

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Tue Aug 30, 2011 4:17 am

Great job, Tinu! They might just think it all over again, and I certainly hope they do, with a positive result. Being the Key means as well Tindome's exceptional talent in persuading. With the help of the cake and wine Smile smiley face

Good stuff!
 
Author's replied on Tue Aug 30, 2011 7:00 am
The more I looked at it, the more there seemed to be very good reasons for them to go... and she can be very persuasive, especially when bearing cake!
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