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RobinKa

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Thu Aug 04, 2011 1:50 pm
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Lovely beginning of another intriguing tale in your Return!verse I'm looking forward to reading more. Thank you. |
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| Author's replied on Thu Aug 04, 2011 4:45 pm |
| Thank you - I should be able to post the next chapter in a few days - I am away from home at the moment - but there is wifi.... |
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RobinKa

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Mon Aug 08, 2011 3:04 pm
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| That was beautifully written. Too sad for words, I'll just keep silent for a moment. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Aug 08, 2011 4:36 pm |
| I'm rather afraid that the whole tale is going to be quite melancholy - but it will have the odd bright moment, I promise. |
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RobinKa

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Fri Aug 12, 2011 1:59 am
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I think the saddest part the relationship between humans and elves (be it friendship or love) is that the elves (and not-quite-elves too) will forever remember, until the world is remade. You've conveyed sadness and pain very well here. Poor Tinu, though. *weeps*
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| Author's replied on Fri Aug 12, 2011 4:36 am |
I think it's why the elves began to withdraw to start with - caring for the mortals just brings more and more loss.
And yes - lessons on how to die were certainly not something Tindómë ever saw herself giving! |
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RobinKa

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Thu Aug 18, 2011 2:33 pm
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This new chapter got me teary. But, it's nice to know there's someone Legolas has been waiting for. 
Very well done. Thanks for the update! |
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| Author's replied on Thu Aug 18, 2011 6:11 pm |
| There is, indeed, someone - but they might take a while to reach a proper understanding... |
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RobinKa

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Fri Aug 26, 2011 1:36 am
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Probably the first time ever that an elf, asked a personal question, had given a straight answer – but in this case a bit of elaboration might have helped.
Ah those pesky elves, you'll never know with them. 
Lovely stuff! |
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| Author's replied on Fri Aug 26, 2011 2:26 am |
They just do it to annoy....
On a side-note, I am going to go back to put a footnote on the chapter 'Strangers in Time and Place' to link to a scene which answers the question of 'What did Galanthir do to keep Legolas from melancholy?' I can't post the scene here as there is mention of possible m/m contact in it. |
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RobinKa

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Tue Aug 30, 2011 4:17 am
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Great job, Tinu! They might just think it all over again, and I certainly hope they do, with a positive result. Being the Key means as well Tindome's exceptional talent in persuading. With the help of the cake and wine 
Good stuff! |
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| Author's replied on Tue Aug 30, 2011 7:00 am |
| The more I looked at it, the more there seemed to be very good reasons for them to go... and she can be very persuasive, especially when bearing cake! |
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