Reviews for "what once was"

Mon Dec 08, 2003 4:14 am

More, More ,more, More!!! Razz smiley face

Mon Dec 08, 2003 5:34 pm

Are you using drabbles to give quick notes on canon characters? If so, you may want to tighten these up and get them down to exactly 100 words (the definition of a drabble, as I understand it). I think it's a great idea! Also, you may want to mention that intention at the beginning, in a note. At first, I was a little confused, thinking that this was a story, and was waiting for some plot to pop up. Once I read it through the first time, I got it about the character sketches, and reread: it was tons more fun and very enjoyable! Care to do Lego next? Sauron maybe? Smile smiley face

Fri Dec 12, 2003 11:27 pm

Neato! The Sauron one was really nice. Loved this line: "Doom, ring the bells of Sauron always, doom doom doom."

Sat Dec 13, 2003 10:36 pm

Very creative writing and good insight into the characters. I was very happy to see you point out Morgoth being the Shadow and Sauron the servant of it. Great job.

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