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spinster
Joined: 07 Jul 2012
Reviews: 9
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Wed Aug 29, 2012 8:24 pm
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| This story is great - very imaginative and well written. You write engaging characters that draw me into their story. Eagerly awaiting more! |
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| Author's replied on Fri Aug 31, 2012 12:18 am |
| Thank you for reading! Eothain is a LOT of fun and watching the transformation of Eadlyn I hope will be as well! |
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Lialathuveril
Joined: 24 Aug 2005
Reviews: 36
Location: Switzerland
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Mon Sep 17, 2012 1:33 pm
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I really enjoyed this story. You've assembled an interesting cast and I'm looking forward to seeing Eadlyn hopefully coming into her own.
The only thing that threw me slightly at first was Gamling being a Marshal, but I guess you're writing Book Verse. And so young 
Also I liked the glimpses of Eomer and Eowyn you included. By the way, is the game of 'Ogetarts' your own invention or did you base it on something?
Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more!
Lia |
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| Author's replied on Tue Sep 18, 2012 3:26 pm |
| Thank you for reading! After the war, Riderverse (which this is part of ) follows for the most part the Appendixes, but as you know, the Appendixes are pretty much an open book for the Rohirrim. So much we don't know, so so much we can... elaborate on! Ogetarts... is a joke and is actually based on a game I know many boys and young men like to play here in the States. (Stratego) thank you again! |
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NeumeIndil
Joined: 06 Jun 2005
Reviews: 156
Location: St. Louis, Missouri, USA
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Sat Feb 09, 2013 10:29 pm
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There's more of this coming, isn't there? We need to see the back of Sabert, preferably with Serei's sword sticking out of it between a couple of ribs. And of course someone's going to scoop up Eothain's sister and teach her a whole new brand of naughty things, right? There's always such good match-making in your stories. I'm a little pulled out by the use of "I'm good" in what I think of as more-or-less historical speech, but meh, small quibbles.  You're on my watch list for this one now. What if I promise to update Ripples and/or Tablut? Will you write more then? |
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| Author's replied on Mon Feb 18, 2013 12:39 am |
| Now you know my speech is a bit more relaxed than most! LOL! And as for Eabae and her Rider...well... you'll see!!!! Soon enough! We'll see the back of Sabert when the time comes. And believe me his time is coming! (Updating has been non-existent for 2 months as I was busy with my Big Bang, which will post in April. Elfhelm and his sweet-tongued wife... 18 years in the past! We get to see a mid-20's Gamling, as well as BOTH of his parents. You'll like!!!! So hopefully, now that that is out of the way.... and if I can get this little dwarf bunny to hush.... Also, The Vacation is set to update this week too...) Thank you for reading! |
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NeumeIndil
Joined: 06 Jun 2005
Reviews: 156
Location: St. Louis, Missouri, USA
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Sun Feb 17, 2013 1:24 am
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Oooh. that had to hurt.  I was hoping she'd come back with something smart (like I'd end up saying, "Oh sure, can you find me one? I certainly don't see any here." but that's not her nature... yet. If Aefre has her way, it might be soon. Next chapter tomorrow? I kid, I kid, but I was glad to see your update tonight. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Feb 18, 2013 12:40 am |
| Hehehehe. Eadlyn will com into her own soon enough. For her. Thank you for reading. |
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MlleGigi
Joined: 22 Sep 2011
Reviews: 3
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Wed Apr 03, 2013 1:45 pm
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| I see...so *this* is where you've been posting your latest updates, instead of at OfElvesAndmen.com! I'll evidently need to start visiting this site more often than previously... |
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| Author's replied on Sun Apr 07, 2013 5:42 pm |
| I've been posting there too! It's just updates faster here because I can update, not the archivest once a week... when I remember to post! LOL! (Also they will be getting my Robin Hood fic IF I ever finish it since there is no where here to post.) |
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spinster
Joined: 07 Jul 2012
Reviews: 9
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Sun Oct 27, 2013 12:37 pm
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| Well, that was a quick drawing together of loose ends! I hope there will be other stories about this family, I really like them. Honestly, I expected much more story, I'm sad that its over. Hugs. Sue |
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| Author's replied on Sun Oct 27, 2013 11:50 pm |
| This was just a side story from Riderverse - because Eadlyn NEEDED a happy ending. It actually ended up bigger than I intended or expected. Not really a lot more to write about... lol! It's part of a cycle - Rider of the Mark, LOVE! Rohirrim Style, My Sweet Thing, and the Diary. There might be some stuff in the Diary with them, I'm not sure. Actually, I"m quite sure there will be. Many of the prompts are dark and fit perfectly into Eadlyn's background. Depends on the muses. Thank you though for reading. |
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