Reviews for "If I'm Lucky"
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NeumeIndil
Joined: 06 Jun 2005
Reviews: 156
Location: St. Louis, Missouri, USA
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Fri Aug 10, 2012 10:13 pm
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YES! They don't fucking NEED to sparkle when they're as bad ass as Eric. In both the books and the serial, Eric has a habit of reminiscing at pivotal moments. His second chance to step into the sun (in TV canon) would be just such a moment. Great scene here! Thanks for it, as always.  |
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| Author's replied on Sat Aug 11, 2012 6:03 am |
I thought it would be a nice Eric moment to describe, besides, I couldn't help nodding at my own ancestors, and the muse bit  I'm glad you like it. Thank you for reading and reviewing! |
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ghettoelleth
Joined: 06 Nov 2004
Reviews: 378
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Sat Aug 11, 2012 5:54 pm
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| Really digs down into the layers of who Eric is, then rises back up to the simple, lovely arrogance that we all know and love. Well done. |
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| Author's replied on Sun Aug 12, 2012 3:05 am |
| It was fun to try to read his mind in that particular moment I'm glad that you think my idea worked. Thank you for reading and reviewing! |
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Viv
Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Sun Aug 12, 2012 9:24 pm
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| Oh, hell yes. Love me some viking interior thought process here. All that practicing writing in Eric's voice? Has made you awesome-saucily good at it. Only downside is it's so short. Great challenge entry. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Aug 13, 2012 1:40 am |
Thank you for reading and your kind words, Viv. What you said means a world to me  Thanks! |
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
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Mon Aug 13, 2012 5:43 pm
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| I am not a TB watcher, but Eric was so plainly here it was excellent. You packed a lot into 100 words, made it sound easy, and never made me guess what was going on. Not to mention a great ending guffaw. Really well done. |
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| Author's replied on Tue Aug 14, 2012 2:20 am |
| Thank you, Nancy, for reading and reviewing! I'm thrilled to hear that you like this little fic Thanks! |
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