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GloryBeeDeb
Joined: 18 Nov 2011
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Mon Feb 11, 2013 12:15 am
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| I am excited tonight to find you have continued this series. This is just as powerful and captivating as the first book in the series. Loved it! Was happy that you wrote about Elwing giving birth to the twins. I do long for the time when Anarie and Glorfindel are reunited. I cannot recall in the timeline just when he returns to Middle Earth. |
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| Author's replied on Tue Feb 12, 2013 3:34 pm |
| I'm glad you continue to follow this story, and like I said at the beginning of the first book, this is a series of stories, not just one, and it certainly didn't finish when Gondolin fell <3 As for the reunion, it will happen eventually ... just not quite yet. Thanks for reading! |
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GloryBeeDeb
Joined: 18 Nov 2011
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Mon Feb 18, 2013 4:12 am
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I know a reunion is a long ways off and there is a lot more story to tell before it gets to that point. I am just eager for it to happen.  I was wondering how the story was going to shift to have the Feanorions take the boys and I certainly did not have to wait a long time for that to happen. I like your portrayal of Maglor. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Feb 18, 2013 12:45 pm |
| It will happen - eventually and I'm simply following what Tolkien wrote in the Silmarillion and other works concerning the First and Second Age of Middle Earth, except that I'm including my OC in them, so the meeting takes place as stated. There was a theory that the boys were actually named by Maglor because of where they were found, but I ignored that one. Thank you for reading and reviewing! |
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GloryBeeDeb
Joined: 18 Nov 2011
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Mon Mar 18, 2013 7:18 pm
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| I was not sure about Elenna but I am warming up to her and like the idea of a family bond forming. Also good that Maglor and Anarie have resolved some differences and she is feeling less like a captive. |
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| Author's replied on Tue Mar 26, 2013 8:02 am |
| Elénna is a product of roleplaying, but she has definitely developed more and we'll be seeing her again also, no idea why OS uploaded chapter 5 twice, I only just noticed this >.< |
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GloryBeeDeb
Joined: 18 Nov 2011
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Mon Apr 29, 2013 4:20 am
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A very powerful but terribly sad chapter, so many characters grieving for bitter losses.  |
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| Author's replied on Thu May 02, 2013 2:14 am |
| We're moving on now, hopefully to slightly cheerier chapters, as the Second Age progresses. Thanks for reviewing! |
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GloryBeeDeb
Joined: 18 Nov 2011
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 2:35 pm
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| What an exciting and dramatic chapter! Anarie has definitely proven her worth. |
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| Author's replied on Fri Jun 21, 2013 2:21 am |
| I'm glad you think so, thanks for reviewing! |
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GloryBeeDeb
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 3:09 pm
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| This chapter started out so lightheartedly but ended on a very serious note. Oh Celebrimbor, if you only had some powers of discernment. I was blessed though by the appearance of Erestor. |
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| Author's replied on Fri Jun 21, 2013 2:22 am |
Yes, things are beginning to turn dark now, but at least we have the likes of Erestor to keep us happy  thank you for reading! |
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GloryBeeDeb
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Mon Jun 24, 2013 5:03 am
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| I must say Malinwen that I was thrilled that Anarie got to go to Lothlorien and meet Galadriel and I look forward to those joys prophesied even though I know they are a long ways away. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Jun 24, 2013 11:02 am |
| I had to make her meet the famous Artanis after all ^^ thank you for reading! |
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athena568
Joined: 29 Nov 2007
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Mon Jul 08, 2013 10:27 pm
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| Wow, this is quite an intriguing tale you have woven. I really like you development of Anárië and how she interacts with everyone - from Ereinion and Elrond through the OCs. So, now we come to Celembrior and the rings of power. It seems the next chapters are going to be intense. Thanks for the story! |
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| Author's replied on Tue Jul 09, 2013 1:00 am |
| I'm glad you like this, it's definitely a personal favourite of mine to write yes, the Rings of Power are alays a pain, no matter where they pop up. Thanks for reading! |
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