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Andreth
Joined: 25 Oct 2003 Reviews: 107
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Sun Dec 14, 2003 9:35 pm
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| This is a very touching story and I enjoyed it. Well done. |
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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003 Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
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Wed Dec 17, 2003 3:59 pm
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A very succesful view of what happened in Laketown, specially AFTER the whole dragon thing. Indeed we found very little evidence on their fates, except for a few lines saying many died.
hell, that can be said of a lot of things.
The part where she feels jealous of the boys'' future wife/lover is also very pertinent. I guess all moms feel it, right? lol.
Very... human. In the best sense of the word.
BRAVO!! |
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Thevina
Joined: 20 Nov 2003 Reviews: 31
Location: U.S.
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Mon Dec 22, 2003 4:50 pm
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Elentari said
> A very succesful view of what happened in Laketown, specially AFTER the whole dragon thing. Indeed we found very little evidence on their fates, except for a few lines saying many died.
> hell, that can be said of a lot of things.
> The part where she feels jealous of the boys'' future wife/lover is also very pertinent. I guess all moms feel it, right? lol.
> Very... human. In the best sense of the word.
> BRAVO!!
Thank you so much!! Yes, the poor people of Laketown vanish until they end up fighting again, mentioned only peripherally in LotR.
Yes, the jealousy about one's son growing up is what sparked the story. So glad that you enjoyed it.  |
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ladyrheena
Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 44
Location: Humming in the corner.
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Thu May 27, 2004 5:12 am
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| That was lovely! Well done, good work! |
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NeumeIndil

Joined: 06 Jun 2005 Reviews: 156
Location: St. Louis, Missouri, USA
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Sun Oct 16, 2005 3:12 am
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| Dang it, almost got through the whole thing without tearing up. Then I read your dedication and that did it! It's usually a good thing, though, when I cry at a story, be it read or spoken. Wonderfully simple yet touching. Thank you for this piece. |
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Haleth

Joined: 27 Sep 2003 Reviews: 96
Location: The ruins of Tharbad.
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Sun Oct 16, 2005 1:35 pm
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Excellently done.
The refugees' POV is almost always forgotten in epic fantasy. It's good to see a story describing both their plight and their opinion of the heroes of the story.
Well done! |
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