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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Tue Mar 26, 2013 8:15 am
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| Ah, another fine story! I definitely enjoy this take, specifically because I haven't actually read any story with Lothíriel's mother still alive, so I'm sure this will make a difference. Also, not many writers grasp Eowyn's character from the angle that she would probably be just as proud and slightly stand-off-ish, if not more, to other Gondorians as she had been to Faramir at the beginning. I like this! Can't wait to read the next chapter. |
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| Author's replied on Fri Mar 29, 2013 11:57 am |
| Great you are reading - I hope you enjoy the rest. Eowyn will need to mellow to win found my Lothy. LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Tue Apr 02, 2013 1:50 am
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| Oh Lothíriel, famous last words. I loved the ending of the chapter, and the whole sequence was beautifully written. I never actually considered Eomer's reaction to Faramir, so this is an interesting take. I have a feeling our princess is going to teach Eomer King a lesson or two. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
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| Author's replied on Sun Apr 07, 2013 8:41 am |
| Yes, Lothy is quite capable of getting one over on Eomer.LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Fri Apr 12, 2013 11:29 am
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| I enjoyed this chapter very much, I always take particular care when writing horses into any of my stories, and I give them their own characters, which means I enjoyed Storm all the more. Eomer is really, really walking right into a mess with his eyes wide open. Silly, silly man. Can't wait to read more! |
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| Author's replied on Sun Apr 14, 2013 10:04 am |
| I have to be careful because I am not a horsey person. But someone will usually point out any errors. I am glad you are enjoying. Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ |
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mahisslp
Joined: 23 Feb 2006 Reviews: 16
Location: Ohio
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Sat Apr 20, 2013 6:37 pm
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| So excited to see a new story from you! You never disappoint and this is shaping up to be another good one. Look forward to more! |
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| Author's replied on Tue Apr 23, 2013 10:32 am |
| Thanks a lot. Hope you enjoy the rest. LBJ |
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athena568
Joined: 29 Nov 2007 Reviews: 110
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Tue Apr 23, 2013 5:13 pm
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| Oh this looks to be another of your terrific stories. I love how you portray and develop a strong and confident Lothiriel and how you show cultural differences. Of course, Eomer must be used to strong women, given who his sister is. I am looking forward to the next chapter! |
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| Author's replied on Sun Apr 28, 2013 2:42 pm |
| I always thought Eomer to be strong and proud, so I think Lothy needs to be able to match him. Thanks a lot for the review. |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Wed Apr 24, 2013 2:16 am
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| I'm enjoying this story more and more, especially with the way our favourite couple slowly stards to build some bridges. I loved the banter at the end, and also, I kind of think Lothiriel and the song is going to be significant somewhere along the line. Can't wait to read more. |
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| Author's replied on Sun Apr 28, 2013 2:45 pm |
| But bridges can be washed away! Long way to go yet, glad you are enjoying. Thanks a lot for reviewing.LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Tue May 07, 2013 2:06 am
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| I'm still laughing over poor Lothiriel getting herself caught between Eomer and Elladan. But I like your portrayal of the sons of Elrond, very nice. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story and seeing just how these terms will be negotiated. |
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| Author's replied on Fri May 17, 2013 2:13 pm |
| It will be a while before the true ending of hostilities. Sorry to be a bit late saying thank you for your review – I have been on holiday with no internet connection. Hope to post the next chapter Sunday or Monday. LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Tue May 21, 2013 5:07 am
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| Oh, Eomer *shakes head* I do enjoy his portrayal, though, very much a true Rohirrim to the core, stubborn and a big boar most of the time. I also had to giggle a little at the comment about Elladan's eyebrows - I don't know if it was on purpose, considering there was a lot of talk about Hugo Weaving's eyebrows in the movie, but it was certainly well done xD Can't wait to see how our King is going to wiggle out of this predicament in the next chapter. |
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| Author's replied on Sat May 25, 2013 11:15 am |
| No it wasn't deliberate -I just see him like that. More fireworks to come. LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005 Reviews: 168
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Tue Jun 04, 2013 2:01 am
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Ah, the chemistry begins - also, imaginin Eomer get all tangled up in a chair was hilarious. Well done. Eowyn has impeccable timing. Can't wait to read more  |
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| Author's replied on Sun Jun 09, 2013 10:34 am |
| Well he was getting a bit bumptious and deserved to lose his dignity! LBJ |
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mahisslp
Joined: 23 Feb 2006 Reviews: 16
Location: Ohio
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Wed Jun 19, 2013 1:54 pm
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| Loved the latest installment. Awesome that she puts him in his place re: the peaches without losing her cool (at least outwardly-grin). Looking forward to more! |
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| Author's replied on Fri Jun 21, 2013 12:14 pm |
| I don't think Lothy will ever have any trouble dealing with Eomer. LoL. Thanks a lot for reviewing, glad you are enjoying. LBJ |
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