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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Sun Jun 23, 2013 2:49 pm
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| I'm definitely enjoying the development of this, I love seeing the King of Rohan go through different circumstances, including being ill - although I suppose he didn't like it one bit. The jealous daughter of the house definitely made me chuckle. Can't wait to read more. |
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| Author's replied on Wed Jun 26, 2013 4:12 pm |
| Watch out for the jealous daughter. LoL. Thanks for reviewing. LBJ |
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inglor
Joined: 26 Apr 2004
Reviews: 201
Location: Not here, not there, not anywhere
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Mon Jun 24, 2013 9:03 pm
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| I have to agree I was pleasantly surprised to meet the Lady of Dol Amroth. As usual, stunning imagery, excellent characterization, all the technical stuff is a lesson in writing. You are the only writer I read anymore beacause your attention to detail makes it a pleasure everytime. My favorites are the little details like plant names, such details are so much mind candy. Your subtlety with developing the emotional is always such a pleasure to read |
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| Author's replied on Wed Jun 26, 2013 4:14 pm |
Hi, Inglor.
Nice to know you are still reading. Lots of plant details to come in the following chapters so I hope you enjoy. LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Thu Jun 27, 2013 5:10 am
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Ah, the daughter. I should have known - and I sincerely hope she gets a good dressing-down for this. Fingers crossed the other Rohirrim figure out something bad's happened. I enjoyed this, as always  |
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| Author's replied on Thu Jun 27, 2013 1:27 pm |
| I bet the jealous daughter didn't quite know what would happen when she left Lothy alone! Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ |
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Sorcia
Joined: 16 Jan 2004
Reviews: 80
Location: Gods, Sean in glasses, how dishy
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Thu Jun 27, 2013 10:02 pm
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| Ch 9 . You know, girls are always way more mean and devious than boys.....enjoyed the 90 angle turn here! Someone needs a hero! |
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| Author's replied on Fri Jun 28, 2013 2:28 pm |
| She will have to manage on her own for a little longer! Thanks for reviewing. LBJ. |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Sun Jul 14, 2013 2:16 am
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| Quick thinking with the mushrooms! Now hopefully the Rohirrim won't be too far off. I enjoyed this, as always |
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| Author's replied on Tue Jul 23, 2013 6:27 am |
| I did set her up with the mushrooms.Lol Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Fri Aug 09, 2013 2:33 am
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| Lovely way to begin my return to reality as I've just got back from vacation if only Eomer wouldn't use ALL the wrong words! Lol, poor man, can't catch a break. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Aug 12, 2013 11:04 am |
Hope you enjoyed your holiday.
Now Eomer has to grovel. LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Mon Aug 12, 2013 2:18 pm
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| I did, thank you. And I love Elladan - he's a resourceful Elf. I can't wait to read the garden conversation. |
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Last edited by Malinwen on Tue Aug 13, 2013 5:15 am |
| Author's replied on Mon Aug 19, 2013 1:02 pm |
| I am getting rather fond of him. too. Thanks a lot for taking the time to review. I will update as soon as I can. LBJ |
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mahisslp
Joined: 23 Feb 2006
Reviews: 16
Location: Ohio
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Tue Aug 13, 2013 11:20 pm
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The latest chapter was a delightful end to a truly awful day! So nice for Lothy to have motherly wisdom to rely on for a change. Anxiously awaiting future developments  . |
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| Author's replied on Mon Aug 19, 2013 1:03 pm |
| Glad you enjoyed. Thanks a lot for taking the trouble to review. Update soon. LBJ |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Sat Aug 24, 2013 2:17 pm
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| Dawh Eomer, so adorable ... but that realization hit me as well as Lothíriel. Sometimes, old traditions and customs are no fun at all. Loved this, as always, and can't wait for the final part |
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| Author's replied on Sun Sep 01, 2013 9:44 am |
| Well I had to make Eomer a bit nicer - he has been pretty awful sometimes. Final piece along soonish. LBJ |
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inglor
Joined: 26 Apr 2004
Reviews: 201
Location: Not here, not there, not anywhere
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Sun Aug 25, 2013 1:42 am
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| Really, really, really enjoy reading your stories. Thanks. Nothing specific. Perfect amount of angst, perfect amount of passion. Pleasant reminder of my first kiss with my wife. Your writing always leaves me with a smile and want to go kiss her. |
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| Author's replied on Sun Sep 01, 2013 9:47 am |
| That's nice - thanks. My husband cannot understand me keep writing about Tolkien's world - but a little fantasy hurts no-one. Great you are still reading my stuff. LBJ |
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