Interesting compassionate take on the situation. I don't think I've seen this before. well done!
Haleth
Joined: 27 Sep 2003 Reviews: 96
Location: The ruins of Tharbad.
Mon Jun 17, 2013 5:47 pm
This is fluffy? Non-fluffy must be very grim indeed!
This is a very compassionate take on Melkor. Well done!
curiouswombat
Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
Sun Jun 23, 2013 10:15 am
Like Haleth I don't regard this as fluffy; no - it is thoughtful, and thought-provoking. And has made me think of something that I had never considered before - thank you.
RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Wed Jun 26, 2013 3:12 pm
This was great!
Your writing is really amazing and the story flows beautifully. The Valar are tricky beings to write, I suppose, because they're demigods, after all. You've done an excellent job of portraying them. Thank you for sharing