Reviews for "Flame of Gondolin, book 3: What About Now"

Mon Jan 27, 2014 7:22 pm

Wow - Anárië had quite the reaction at seeing a ghost of her dead husband! I was confused about some of the things that occurred in the previous chapter before Glorfindel's presence made her faint. Yelling at Elrond in front of an audience of people seemed out of character - although fainting was realistic. Luckily Elrond apparently took no affront and is in healer mode here. I think perhaps he has already put two and two together given 'Lord Glorfindel' and Anarie's reaction - even if others haven't. Still it turned out not to be so wise for Glorfindel to slip into her room during the night. Perhaps anyone so shaken up might also have some protection slipped under their pillow - like she does with a knife.

"Why is it, you think, that whenever I come close to you I have to restrain you?" Hmmm not the most romantic of notions for a husband. I look forward to the next chapter and your characterization of Glorfindel. Nice work!

Mon Feb 10, 2014 5:54 pm

Oh, my goodness! That was such a compelling chapter! I don't know how I will wait for then next one. You weave Anárië's fear of Glorfindel so deftly within the context of the coming threat of Annatar. Then all is brought to a head when Lachuí's message arrives. Of course, Glorfindel and Elrond are heading off. Anárië's heart is going with them - even if she is bound to stay to guard Ereinion. Excellent chapter!

Mon Feb 24, 2014 9:19 pm

Ah, thanks to Berien we finally get to the heart of Anárië's mixed and tumultuous feelings about Glorfindel. Glorfindel's letter was so dense - that he fears for her and thinks it likely that Sauron will turn his attention to Lindon is clear. But I was surprised and concerned to read his warning that she "trust only those closest to you" - does he fear another traitor - like Maeglin did he hear something while in Lindon that worried him? The closing lines were beautiful - she should not doubt that he loves her. Great chapter!

Wed Mar 12, 2014 5:10 pm

I like how you develop Anarie's character with all the little details - including how she has trouble with personal letters and how much she agonized over her letter back to Glorfindel. The King found it funny and the ensuing conversation with Ereinion was well written. So, Lachui has returned - with dire predictions and a warning from Glorfindel. "Something is coming, Anárië. I’m sure you can sense it. And I’m afraid we will not be ready when it does. Protect the King at all cost.’ Wow - if Anarie's own for boding is not enough. I can' help but grimace at what her next level of training will be like! Great chapter!

Tue Mar 25, 2014 2:10 am

So, Anárië did get to work out her frustrations on the practice yard - but was usually down in the dirt due to Lachuí's moves. Let's just hope her training proves to be enough. The scene with Lachuí and Anárië getting a first glimpse of the Nine was really creepy. They will soon find out what these riders represent. I wonder how that will change their perspectives on carrying the three elven rings?

Mon Apr 07, 2014 7:42 pm

Wow, this was a big jump in time and a little confusing at the beginning. The transition might be something you want to add a little more detail to But I can totally understand why you did so - given the large breech of time you want to cover. The initial reunions at Imladris were very good. And it was no surprise that Ereinion gave Elrond Vilya. Still the love declared between Anarie and Glorfindel made me wish for more. Even though, as you point out - Anarie and Glorfindel are similar in their loyalty - and they would both be compelled to stay with their respective charges. Yet, I am very worried - given the fate of Anarie's charge, surely you do not think that will be her fate as well? At least, I hope not! I look forward to the next chapter!

Mon Apr 21, 2014 6:22 pm

Oh, a closer brush with the Nazgul and the first attempt to fight them off. Loved Uindor's barked laughter and observation as to how they escaped. "Hardly. Anárië set the bastard on fire." She blunted their awe quite effectively, even though she was suffering from what they would later name the 'black breath'. Awesome that Glorfindel showed up beside her, though they must have feared greatly to have summoned him from Imladris! Excellent chapter!

Mon May 19, 2014 1:20 pm

I enjoyed your characterization of Elendil and his sons - especially that of Anárion. It is a nice thought that Elros' influence might still be found in their faces. Given Isildur's accomplishments in the war, it is sad that the ring influences him so quickly. You have already foreshadowed that deed - and both Elrond and Anárië sense something. A funny coincidence that Anárië and Anárion's names are so close! Ah, the poor plight of Anárië and Glorfindel's marital state - seems to be ever to be apart. One hopes that they have had some time together for private things - though you do a nice job of showing their relationship and Glorfindel's obvious respect for Anárië. Wonderful chapter!

Fri Jun 13, 2014 4:15 pm

"And because you need to realize the girl you wed in Gondolin is not the woman you are trying to control." Ouch! Well, I do think Glorfindel needed to hear that. But, wow, this chapter was so intense. Anárië has come full circle, and yet this last alliance will likely leave its mark on them all. Very compelling!

Tue Jun 24, 2014 5:47 pm

Oh my! I had to reread this several times - it was so intense! Such a close call for Anárië! So brave to save Lachuí even if the choices that she had to make to save him were horrific. I can only image what Glorfindel was shouting when he saw the missile coming and Anárië and so many others in its pass! Very intense! Then to end with Anárion's death…..

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