Reviews for "Flame of Gondolin, book 4: Once Upon a Dream"
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athena568
Joined: 29 Nov 2007
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Thu Apr 30, 2015 9:35 pm
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| What a build up and such detail on the allies who drove the Witch-king from Fornost! Even the Halflings were included. I could not stop reading until it came to an end. So, we hear Glorfindel's famous prediction and perhaps a glimpse of what might drive Earnur to later be lost. Great chapter! |
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| Author's replied on Mon May 04, 2015 2:40 pm |
| Thank you, I'm glad you've enjoyed the chapter! All these allies always make me go crazy trying to get them straight haha. |
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Tibb
Joined: 25 Oct 2014
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Mon May 04, 2015 8:44 pm
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| Congrats on another wonderful segment of Anarie's story. Can't wait for the next part. |
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| Author's replied on Thu May 07, 2015 2:47 am |
| Thank you! There won't be any uploads from me over the summer I'm afraid, but as soon as autumn hits I have something in the works, not quite part 5 yet, but something! |
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athena568
Joined: 29 Nov 2007
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Tue May 05, 2015 5:13 am
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| With all the fan fiction views of elves celebrating their 'begetting day', the sad event of an early miscarriage was unexpected. Poor Anárië - that is not how one wants to find out about a pregnancy. I suspect they will grieve for awhile. In Japan, there are shrines and even memorial services for those who have had a miscarriage. I wonder if it elves would have something similar? You portray Anárië and Glorfindel as very private people, so such a service would reflect that. A sad twist to the tale. |
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| Author's replied on Thu May 07, 2015 2:49 am |
Thank you for sticking through the story with me and our favourite couple. I wanted to represent how Anárië gets to struggle with who she is after just accepting it, because being a mother and the Marshal won't quite work ... I love the idea of a shrine or memorial service! I'll have to look into that. Thank you again for reading, and I hope you'll keep following these adventures when they return in autumn  |
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