Reviews for "Flame of Gondolin, novella: Hold On"
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athena568
Joined: 29 Nov 2007
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Mon Sep 14, 2015 5:05 pm
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| Oh no - the year is 2509! Could the drama be ratched any higher? Love your portrayal of Celebrian - she and Anárië are such strong, bold characters. But for Celebrian - my heart clenches with fear, since we know tragedy is looming. Could her sons or husband have dissuaded her? It does not seem so. Then the bell tolling of danger and Gildor's company's arrival - all seems set as a diversion of epic proportions. A nail-biting start to the new story, for sure. |
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| Author's replied on Tue Sep 15, 2015 3:18 am |
| Thank you for reading! I've always felt Celebrían had to be someone with character to be able to marry Elrond. The next segment goes up tonight! |
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Tibb
Joined: 25 Oct 2014
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Tue Sep 15, 2015 11:41 pm
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| Thanks for continuing this wonderful series. Been waiting all summer. |
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| Author's replied on Wed Sep 16, 2015 1:34 am |
You are very welcome  thanks for reading! |
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athena568
Joined: 29 Nov 2007
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Wed Sep 16, 2015 7:34 pm
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| Compelling chapter! The encounter with the wolves was nail biting. Although aren't Elrohir and Elladan battle tried warriors by now at a respectable age of ~2000+ and not so very young? Still. it works quite well in your story and it is very hard to wrap one's head around elven ages. Perhaps as elves of the watchful peace….. Lachuí will likely think up some more punishment, mitigated a little by the last comments. |
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| Author's replied on Thu Sep 17, 2015 1:39 am |
| They are, in a way, but at the same time, they haven't actually fought in any serious battles yet like the older Elves, so I'm not precisely saying they are inexperienced, they simply don't quite understand the seriousness of the situation yet thanks for reviewing! |
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Tibb
Joined: 25 Oct 2014
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Sat Sep 19, 2015 2:46 pm
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| LIked it. A nice little tale of Celebrian's ordeal. Can't wait till part 5 (Hobbit era possibly?). |
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| Author's replied on Sun Sep 20, 2015 3:08 pm |
| It might still be some time, but the plan is for it to start uploading in January 2016 thank you for your support! |
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