Reviews for "We Survived Because of Me!"

Wed Dec 17, 2003 5:17 pm

Poor gollum! Shifting the pronouns should have bothered the hoohah out of me (I'm grammatically anal), but I think I can tell what you're doing here, and it's really fresh and clever. The description of his mouth as "sharp" struck me as wildly appropriate, though I can't imagine why. I guess because he's such a sharp little guy in general: planning, purposing, underfed, opportunistic. Anyway, very nice piece. And very challenge-correct. Woot!

Fri Feb 06, 2004 3:14 am

Well, we finally gets out, do we? And we sees that evil filthy hobbitseshave said nasty things about us. All we wants to do is read more, Precious! Why do they never write more about us? And why are they never as good as this? Why do they always take the filthy tricksy hobbitses side? We needs more like this, my love, we do.

Mon Mar 15, 2004 12:32 am

Lovely. I love how you put Deagol into the story, and Gulloms feelings of guilt about Deagol. Good little fic, luv.

Thu Jun 03, 2004 6:10 am

Great piece. Pronoun shifts should have bothered me, also, but then, that is Gollom. He was not very grammatically correct. All in all, a job well-done. But, criticism, too short. Now you must write something else. Go, write.

Mon Mar 07, 2005 9:09 pm

Ahhhh.....precious! Very Happy smiley face

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