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BellemaineChercoeur

Joined: 28 May 2003 Reviews: 106
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Sat Dec 20, 2003 3:22 am
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| lyric, gorgeous imagery and a light touch with emotion. Wonderful piece! |
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boz4PM
Joined: 01 Dec 2003 Reviews: 38
Location: London, UK
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Sat Dec 20, 2003 1:06 pm
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BellemaineChercoeur said: "lyric, gorgeous imagery and a light touch with emotion. Wonderful piece!"
Wow. Thankyou SO much. Very glad you liked it and liked it enough to review it. Made my day! *Hurrah! Runs off skipping* |
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Leilana
Joined: 19 Jan 2004 Reviews: 56
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Thu Jan 29, 2004 5:51 pm
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| its beautiful, sad and poignant. thanks |
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boz4PM
Joined: 01 Dec 2003 Reviews: 38
Location: London, UK
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Fri Jan 30, 2004 6:30 pm
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Thank YOU for reviewing and letting me know you liked it, Leilana.  |
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Julie
Joined: 02 Feb 2004 Reviews: 23
Location: Texas
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Fri Feb 06, 2004 12:37 pm
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This was excellent. You have captured the beauty and the tragedy of the situation with just a few words, and done it extremely well. Thank you.
--Julie, wiping away a tear |
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
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Fri Feb 06, 2004 3:07 pm
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Nice, lyrical, well-paced & well-handled. It's quite good.
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boz4PM
Joined: 01 Dec 2003 Reviews: 38
Location: London, UK
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Sat Feb 07, 2004 2:01 pm
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Thank you both. Glad you liked it. Please, if you have the time or the inclination, read the story it comes from and let me know what you think of that as well.  |
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HollyTook

Joined: 24 Jan 2004 Reviews: 36
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Sun Feb 08, 2004 11:03 am
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| This was a nice piece. I'm sorry I couldn't read it in Elvish. I am glad you used original words and images to express this idea which is so often simplified. |
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boz4PM
Joined: 01 Dec 2003 Reviews: 38
Location: London, UK
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Sun Feb 08, 2004 12:00 pm
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Thank you HollyTook for taking the time to read and review it. I'm sorry I couldn't write it in Elvish! Maybe one day. |
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003 Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
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Thu Jun 03, 2004 12:55 pm
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| Lovely! Now I need to go read the story of these lovers! I'm hooked here, so sweet and sad a parting! *big happy weepy sigh* |
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