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BellaRue
Joined: 11 Nov 2003 Reviews: 14
Location: Las Vegas
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Tue Dec 30, 2003 5:27 pm
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| You are off to a good start with this one... I like that it's in Washington, with the dreary weather, it is a good setting... |
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Marigold

Joined: 05 Jan 2004 Reviews: 10
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Mon Jan 05, 2004 5:18 am
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| Very intriging so far. I can't wait to read more. |
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LegolasLover
Joined: 09 Aug 2003 Reviews: 7
Location: USA
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Thu Apr 15, 2004 7:41 am
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Its good I like it so far. What I would like to find is a story like this with a man in ME. I think it would stand out more. But anyway I thought everything was very good. I wish there was more to read right now. And just so you know your titles go prologue, ch. 1, ch. 2, ch. 4. Keep writing! |
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Thu Apr 15, 2004 6:50 pm
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Its getting interesting. Keep updating! I wonder what she is.. i smell a prophecy I could be wrong though  |
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Fri Apr 16, 2004 4:56 pm
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alright they are off! can't wait to see what adventures they get themselves into! update soon! |
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Mon Apr 19, 2004 5:04 pm
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woohoo! no spiders! yea! I have a BIG fear of spiders so I was happy to read no spiders in this ch. I think its funny that her mind keeps wondering and the elves make fun of her for it! keep up the good work! can't wait till they reach Rivendell!!! |
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Tue Apr 20, 2004 6:16 pm
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Alright! They have finally met! I can't wait till you update.. so I hope you do it soon! Its just gettin real good! |
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Thu Apr 22, 2004 6:06 pm
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Wow.. I'm the only one reviewing... this is odd.. O well! Its a good story! I bet when its finished people will read it more and then you will get more reviews! Well another good ch as always.. so I hope you update soon again!  |
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Fri Apr 23, 2004 5:28 pm
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Hey again Trix! Another great ch. She is an empath that is awesome! Can't wait for the next ch! |
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Trix
Joined: 13 May 2003 Reviews: 5
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Fri Apr 23, 2004 10:44 pm
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Hey StArSpLaSh!!! I'm sooooo glad you like this story. Keep reviewing Please It's good to know that even ONE person likes my story...  |
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