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StArSpLaSh
Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Thu Apr 29, 2004 6:44 pm
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Hey Trix! Again I loved the ch.!  hope you are feeling better soon!... So you can update again! hehehe |
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StArSpLaSh
Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Sun May 02, 2004 6:21 pm
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| WOOHOO! That was a lot of updates! All were great chapters I can't wait for more. You are doing a great job! keep it comming! |
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StArSpLaSh
Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Tue May 04, 2004 6:38 pm
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| Hmm that was a very interesting chapter. I felt that the dream sequence is over done however if done well it could make the story. You did a good job, through the dream her soul heals. keep up the good work and update soon! |
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StArSpLaSh
Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Wed May 05, 2004 7:47 pm
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WOW!!!!!...“You are Arda.” That is incredible I never would have guessed. Which is probably what you wanted! hehe Newayz update !!!!  PLEASE!!! I wanna know what happens when she meets everyone again!!!!! |
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StArSpLaSh
Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Sun May 09, 2004 4:17 pm
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| WOOHOO!!! I feel the Girl Power! Hahaha! These last 2 chapters were GREAT! I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon! |
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StArSpLaSh
Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Mon May 10, 2004 3:39 pm
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ITS OVER!!!!!!! wwaaaahhh!  BUT! It was really good! One thing I noticed at the very end you have the word "expected" I was just wondering if you ment it to be that word or if you ment accepted... She had told Eowyn and Eomer of who she was, and though they found it difficult to understand they (excepted) her promptly as their family. Just wanted to let ya know. Newayz GREAT story thanks for writing!  |
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Amlee
Joined: 06 Jul 2004
Reviews: 18
Location: Alabama
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Fri Jul 16, 2004 3:44 pm
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| I just came across this story!! It's amazing. I very much enjoyed it! |
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saborice
Joined: 11 Jun 2004
Reviews: 33
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Wed Aug 25, 2004 11:18 pm
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| Just finished Chapter 16, I think it was. Firstly, greaty job so far. I feel so much how Syah does at times. It touches my inner deamons. When Syah heard those words, ..."You are Arda." I was speechless. Great job, hun. |
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saborice
Joined: 11 Jun 2004
Reviews: 33
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Wed Aug 25, 2004 11:29 pm
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| Hey Trix, I really liked your story. Especially the parts with Boromir in her dreams, her becoming whole again, and the ending. Well done, dear. |
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Yavanie
Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 122
Location: Texas
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Sat Aug 28, 2004 4:40 pm
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| Since it's not nice to read and not review, I shall now review. Took me a few days to work my way through the story (real life kept interrupting). Enjoyed it much. Only criticism is it moved way too fast in some places. It reads like a well thought out draft of what could be a really, really good story. Some of your paragraphs are well done and evoke great imagery. Others seem to speed over a point almost without a thought, seems like some of the characters accepted things without even thinking about them. I really hope you have the inclination to develop this more. I really like the premise of the story, no Mary-Sue here! A very intriguing concept. If you really want to expand on this, send me a pm and I'd be happy to make some more suggestion. Can't say there was much I didn't like, just some things I would like to have seen expanded on, more in depth. I did enjoy it much. Wish there was more even. I hope you are working on some more stories. I'd like to read more of your work. |
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