Reviews for "A Soul Contrite"

Fri Jan 02, 2004 11:54 pm

I love the way you show Pippin beginning to grow up and understand his actions have repercussions. I feel so bad for Merry here also, for the first time he can't make his cousin's hurts go away. You have done a wonderful job. Smile smiley face

Tue Jan 06, 2004 10:21 am

Great piece. Great use of perspective and inner voice, and beautifully developed. Well Done!

Thu Feb 12, 2004 5:15 pm

Nicely done- the introspection works without sounding "unhobbitish," and the insight into their relationship and how they are being changed by forces over which they have no control is thoughtfully presented.

Mon Mar 15, 2004 6:12 pm

Wonderful peek into the hearts of these two adorable Hobbits who were thrust unaware into this quest. Very well written.

Sun Mar 21, 2004 4:05 pm

You've captured the souls of Pippin and Merry at a very pivotal point. Pippin's contrition and Merry's silent worry and support are very real. So is Pippin's determination to try to make amends. It really shows the unbreakable spirit of the hobbits, even in the worst situations. This is what no one in the books, save Gandalf, understood.

Sat May 15, 2004 3:17 am

Very wordy for hobbits. It's potencial is neverending. Go forth and write more...Heh. or not. I liked it.
Luv,
Ur Samwise

Wed Aug 04, 2004 5:32 am

Very well done. Haleth pretty well said it. I do not much care for Hobbit stories, however, I have found two or three here that I did not regret reading. Yours is one of them. I may just have to go in search of more. Thank you. Drunk smiley face

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