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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004
Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
Thu Apr 08, 2004 6:25 pm
Awww, a sad vignette, but well written! Please do continue to write more? I'd certainly be interested. Smile smiley face
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Mon Dec 06, 2004 6:30 am
This was a very good premise. It could use some more description, rather than so much dialogue (I hope Marcia does not read this!) Anyway, there were also numerous places where punctuation could be put to better use. It was rather good for a first effort, but a beta would be of great aid to you. Thank you for sharing.
 
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