Reviews for "Spontaneous Romanticism"

Tue Jan 20, 2004 5:09 pm

Haven't finished this yet but so far:

1. You have an Erestor avvie & you reviewed me on FF.net.
2. Haldir is alive.
3. You grasp grammar and punctuation and use spellchecker.
4. You say elf maid and not she elf.

Whats not to like? Im enjoying this.

One thing - the Galadhrim are the collective inhabitants of Lorien, it means something like tree people. Just so you know...

Thu Jan 22, 2004 11:03 pm

Thank you Moralanqua for your feedback, I am glad you are enjoying it.
I must say, I am also enjoying Thinnedhel's Bane, particularly your characterization of Rúmil. Square smiley face

I am a bit curious though:
I am aware of who the Galadhrim are, which reference did I make to them that led you to believe otherwise?
If at all possible I'd like to edit anything unclear in this story, and it is certainly hard to edit my own work sometimes. Wink smiley face

Fri Jan 23, 2004 7:05 am

Funny and with a lovely use of tone and ambience. Sparkling dialogue! A very enjoyable read! Laughing smiley face

Sun Jan 25, 2004 11:10 pm

Oh, I think that may be the best bit of humor fanfic I've ever read. Very witty and engaging. I love Andúnil's character, she's just so sarcastic, it's almost sinful. And of course, naughty little Rúmil.... Very enjoyable, eagerly awaiting more Very Happy smiley face

Tue Jan 27, 2004 7:57 pm

Lord..... Rúmil just doesn't know when to quit, does he? But that's why we all love him so ^________^ Anyways, this is one of the most hilarious stories I've ever had the pleasure of reading. Do keep up the good work!

Wed Mar 03, 2004 9:50 am

Ack!

I'm still laughing my butt off over Rumil and the kiss... I had a friend in HS who did that. I couldn't hit him when he said somthing vulgar because it just turned him on. Get that poor boy an elleth with some rope and a whip.

Great story, can't wait to see what happens next!

Nienna

Sat Mar 13, 2004 3:48 pm

Lordy....... everything becomes a fiasco when it has Andúnil somehow involved in it, ne? ^__^

Tue Mar 23, 2004 11:05 pm

Erestor researching love....that had me in stitches! I am very curious to see what else could go wrong for our poor elf maiden! Update soon!

Thu Jun 17, 2004 8:42 pm

This is one of the funniest tales I have ever read.
Please update soon.

Can't anything ever go correctly in this wild romance?

Mon Mar 07, 2005 10:25 pm

OH MY GOD!!!!

Obviously it has been a very long time since you updated this. This is just absolutely hilarious!!!! I have been laughing so hard I have had tears streaming down my face on several occasions.

Talasi

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