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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Thu Apr 15, 2004 6:20 am
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oh yeah! Now Galadriels involved.... yay! Fenwick....... you just wait! One of these days, I'm coming for you.... as soon as I find my map........Really interesting and I can't wait for more!  |
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eokat
Joined: 27 Jan 2004 Reviews: 31
Location: England
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Thu Apr 15, 2004 3:59 pm
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So happy to see another chapter. Loved the dialogue between Lothiriel and Eowyn, that was so emotional, she does not want her brother to suffer any more pain. That was lovely, little sister looking out for big brother. There are so many now on the lovers side, surely Fenwicks days are numbered, hope so anyway. Loved it as usual.Eokat.  |
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ElenaTiriel

Joined: 17 Mar 2004 Reviews: 132
Location: The Grey Havens
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Sat Apr 17, 2004 12:48 am
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I don't usually like romances, but this story has really intrigued me! I think your development of the characters and the relationships between them - especially the siblings - is very well-done and enjoyable.
Galadriel's comment to Fenwick caused my "ears to prick up". I've noticed that you haven't explained just how he and his family managed to protect the other port from the Corsairs of Umbar. Is the Fenwick family in cahoots with the Corsairs? Do they bribe the pirates? Or do they ensure safety for their port by providing strategic information about other locations in Gondor that are more vulnerable? You never explained why Fenwick was sneaking into Imrahil's office and snooping around... (Can you tell I just plain don't trust that guy? LOL!)
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Treegirl
Joined: 17 Apr 2004 Reviews: 1
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Sat Apr 17, 2004 1:14 am
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Enjoying the story tremendously! Definitely gives a personalized touch to some well-loved characters, such as
Eowyn, Gimli, Legolas, Pippin,Galadriel, Gandalf...would love to see inclusion of Aragorn/Arwen,as well, but I know it'll be great regardless! Keep it up, look forward to new installments! |
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Concetta

Joined: 22 Mar 2004 Reviews: 25
Location: Maryland, USA
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Sat Apr 17, 2004 4:07 pm
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| Another great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! Amrothros is so cute when he's jealous! |
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GoldenButterfly
Joined: 31 Mar 2004 Reviews: 32
Location: Wisconsin
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Mon Apr 19, 2004 10:29 pm
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need....more....story....!!! need.....another...chapter...!!!
I have been constantly checking and rechecking your story site jsut to see if you've posted another chpater yet! Will you be updating soon?? I hope, I hope...
I am trying to wait patiently...
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brownsuga
Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 9
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Tue Apr 20, 2004 5:59 pm
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Hey there will you be updating anytime
I'm goin crazy as Goldenbutterfly!!!!!!!!! |
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Cele

Joined: 05 Feb 2004 Reviews: 16
Location: Rohan
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Tue Apr 20, 2004 8:21 pm
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Whooohooo!!! Our beloved King is going to deal with that twit....yeah!!! Good, good stuff, Nove....as always. The tension is really building between Ani and Eomer as well. That Fentwick is up to no good...who the heck is he working with anyway? Corsairs? I hope Eomer's spear is sharpened to a nice shiny point....
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Gwenevere

Joined: 06 Apr 2004 Reviews: 25
Location: United States
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Tue Apr 20, 2004 9:27 pm
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So I'm thinking it would be really cool if somehow Fenwick had an "accident." Anyway, what a lovely chapter, Novedh! I thoroughly enjoyed it.  |
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amybethm
Joined: 28 Feb 2004 Reviews: 34
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Tue Apr 20, 2004 9:31 pm
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Woo hoo! That has to be the best marriage proposal ever! Major points to Eomer for the spectacular setting! I was really happy to see the secret passageways get a good use so soon after their introduction. I hope we'll see them again soon! I can see Eomer and Anhuil sneaking off in the early morning hours years from now as a married couple- assuming they can dump that nasty Fenwick.
One of these days Fenwick has to slip up and make a mistake! He seems way too ruthless to be telling the whole truth. I guess if they get really desperate, Ani and Eomer can get caught doing something "inappropriate", and have the marriage contract dissolved. I don't think the Rohirrim care much about a scandal. As long as Ani and her family can take it...
Eomer makes me all swoony in this chapter! His speech about wanting her to stay and hear their children's laughter in the halls...sigh.
I'm glad Imrahil knows the full scoop about Eomer and Ani and their feelings at last. Not that it'll do a tremendous amount of good _now_, but at least he knows. I'm getting really anxious for them! There has to be a way out of this betrothal!
Things are moving into high gear now, I can tell! Something has to happen soon.
All melty and swoony over Eomer,
Amy B. |
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