Reviews for "Trust To Hope"

Tue Apr 20, 2004 9:54 pm

Wonderful chapter! Bounce smiley face

Men from the real world should take a quick class with Éomer about how to be romantic without losing their masculinity. Reading smiley face

His choice of place for his marriage proposal to Ani was superb! Plus, I had the joy to read this story with that exquisite banner of Éomer's eyes. He has such a powerful gaze that it makes me feel goose bumps when I face it. Bunny smiley face

I hope that Éomer gets Fenwick by the neck and makes the pig be so scared that he and Ani would be finally left in peace. Scary smiley face

Great job! I'm already dying for a new chapter Laughing smiley face

Wed Apr 21, 2004 12:42 am

Okay, I have decided that I should practice what I preach and start reviewing to the stories I love.

Anyway... This is by far one of the best stories I have ever read. The way you weave the plot line in and out is so seamless. Your characters are believable... I want so bad for Eomer and Lothiriel to find true happiness, and for Fenwick to die a horrible, painful, slow and tortuous death. And I want the stupid Gondorian betrothal contract and practices to burn in Mount Doom!

The first time I saw this story, I did not know if I wanted to read it, as it was an Eomer story, and I have never felt particularly akin to his character. After this story, all I can say is Legolas (and all other elves) who? I downloaded the story to my computer when it had twenty four chapters so I would not stay online too long while reading. It was a bad decision to do that because then I stayed up for nine straight hours reading and did not sleep until five in the morning. Even then I could not sleep because I wanted more...

So that is where this leaves me... I want more, more, MORE! Understand?

Anyway, this is a wonderful story,

Tracy

Bow smiley face

Wed Apr 21, 2004 1:54 am

Legolas who? indeed! Love your prostrating smiley's, Losille! Anyway, much praise and prostration for Ms. Nove -- fabulous, riveting stuff, beautifully paced, beautifully written, and I just now picked myself off the floor after swoooooning over that marriage proposal. Lawdy, where were you when my hubby needed lessons? Very Happy smiley face

Anyway, Nove, if you need someone to do some laundry for you, pick the kids up from school, babysit, cook, clean, you just let us know -- looking at these reviews there'd be many a volunteer, if it would give you more writing-time... WE WANT MORE!!!

Oh, and while I'm visiting the extra emoticons, here's what I'd like to happen to Fenwick: Magician smiley face

or whatever other torturous death you devise, dear Bard!

Much appreciation,
Kementári

Wed Apr 21, 2004 9:45 am

ElenaTiriel brought up an excellent point. How are they getting rid of the Corsairs hmm? Anyway, why can't men be like Eomer? *sigh* His wedding proposal was so sweet and romantic yet masculin... and the setting he chose was beautiful beyond belief. It's now definitely on my "places to visit before death comes along".... Anyway, it seems that a lot of reviewers want that toadslime to die, (need I give a name?) yet I would much rather have him suffer his whole life as a lowly servant or such. But after what he did, perhaps you'll have to dig him out of the grave first since I'm gonna be along asap (when schools over) to come kill him. Just as a question, where will he be in June? Actually, I could get away in May... so, where can I find him? I know Arda, but where? Laughing smiley face

You know how people can die of starvation? Well, I can survive if I have a new chapter.. so please write soon! WE WANT MORE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Always,
Kalama Very Happy smiley face

Wed Apr 21, 2004 11:10 am

Chapter 24...... Ahhhhhh.....

Ani & Eomer, The Snowbourne, the sunrise and a marriage proposal. What a fantastic way to propose, and the visual was superb. You get an A for that one!

And I also enjoyed the 'discussion' between Eomer and Fenwick. It was well written and very direct. I could just see Eomer pulling his long sword from its sheath and wacking off Fenwick's head!

Well, I could.
Who would care?
Who would quesion a King?

OK. OK. I know Eomer King is not like that, but still. It's truly better than Fenwick deserves.

I have a feeling all will be revealed about who he's working with. The Bard of Rohan knows her stuff and researches everything, many times over. We will find out, of that I'm sure.

Thank you again for a great chapter. The down side of having chapter 24 is now we have to wait for chapter 25!

Thanks Again,
Sally

Wed Apr 21, 2004 2:54 pm

*whimpers* He lives. Fenwick lives. WHY????? *sobs* I would use my more colorful vocabulary the describe what I want to do to him, but I'm not sure who reads the reviews. In any case, the most pain possible sounds good. More updates soon, and whatever happens to cow-pie-head can never be enough now. Haaaaaaaaaaaate..... *goes off to devise colorful ends to Fenwick*

Fri Apr 23, 2004 1:30 pm

This was superb, what a marriage proposal. Eomer MUST find a way soon to marry Lothiriel. Please he must. Fenwick is still a ********* I won't upset my computer by printing the words. An update soon please. Eokat. Soon smiley face

Sun Apr 25, 2004 6:33 pm

*Sob* Poor Ani! Poor Éomer! Heartbreaking chapter! Looking forward to more!

Sun Apr 25, 2004 8:43 pm

*glances up from a sheet of paper* Very nice. More, ASAP. *turns back to he paper titled "To Do to Fenwick"; the sheet stretches out the door and down a few long hallways*

Sun Apr 25, 2004 11:21 pm

An excellent chapter!!! I want more!!!! I am left wondering what will happen next! Now that she is leaving, what will Fenwick do? What will Cam find out about Fenwick...and oh how I truly dislike Fenwick...with a passion!!! He is utterly despicable!! The perfect evil character!!!!! When does he get his swift kick in the *ss???!!!

Keep writing...MORE, MORE, MORE!!!!

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