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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Sat May 08, 2004 6:27 am
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So great! Hilarious.. and they caught Him! Haha! (I'm not usually this cruel, but then, there aren't many who can keep up with Fenwick!) Keep writing!   |
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kinvara
Joined: 18 Feb 2004
Reviews: 58
Location: middle of nowhere, dorset
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Sat May 08, 2004 1:41 pm
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| These last few chapters have been brilliant and i can't wait for more. PLease say you will update soon because i have 3exams really really soon and reading is the only thing that's going to get me through! Keep writing. |
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Novedhelion
Joined: 04 Sep 2003
Reviews: 42
Location: NC
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Sat May 08, 2004 4:40 pm
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kinvara said
> These last few chapters have been brilliant and i can't wait for more. PLease say you will update soon because i have 3exams really really soon and reading is the only thing that's going to get me through! Keep writing.
Oh...so no pressure, right?  Sorry...for some reason I'm really having to GRASP for chapter 28! Should be up soon!
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ladytinewen
Joined: 13 Apr 2004
Reviews: 15
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Sun May 09, 2004 12:08 pm
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| The plot thickens! Great chapter please update soon. |
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Sun May 09, 2004 12:19 pm
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28 - magnificent! Great opening sentence about Cam! Anyway, really sweet! Will we ever find out about Willa?? I hope it doesn't become a problem...*sighs*. Great chapter anyway, so keep writing!
Mona
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amybethm
Joined: 28 Feb 2004
Reviews: 34
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Sun May 09, 2004 12:51 pm
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Oo, what a juicy chapter!
I hope the little episode with Willa doesn't come back to haunt Eomer in a nasty way later- that makes me nervous! My guess is his instinct is right: nothing really happened, but she's manipulating the situation to make it look incriminating.
I loved seeing Eomer and Ani together again, but the tension is going to kill me! I hope Fenwick gets his comeuppance very soon! The ending sounds promising. Could Cam be onto some solid evidence with Neville? I'm a little concerned for her safety, wandering into a questionable part of town alone, even if she is a very competent fighter. And what is she up to with the "poison ring" and looking for iffy herbs? She has something up her sleeve!
Truly something has to turn the tide in their favor soon. The way they yearn for each other is wonderful, but gut-wrenching!
Of course I'm waiting anxiously, already, for the next part! Surely Fenwick or his minion is going to make a careless move soon, maybe right now!
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Sun May 09, 2004 6:51 pm
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Well, well...another outstanding chapter! And indeed, the plot does thicken! I'm VERY suspicious about Willa and what MAY have occured between her and Eomer. Poisonous rings, suspicious herbs...sounds like bad news to me. And what's up with Neville? Hmm, could Fenwick and Neville have something to do with what occured with Willa and Eomer?? So many questions, so many questions!
It is good to see Ani and Eomer together, they're such a great couple. But I hope that ring she bought him doesn't get put to the test 
Anyway, you're doing a great job...yada, yada, yada....blah, blah, blah...you know what I'm going to say, so why bother repeating what's been said 200 times before. By now, you know you're writing is superb and worthy of all it's praise...right?
So, I'll just say keep up the good work and I'll be checking back for your update.
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AzureDragoness
Joined: 11 Jan 2004
Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
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Sun May 09, 2004 10:33 pm
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Uh oh, is Cam going to get some juicy blackmail on Fenwick?? Ooooh, hope so!!
More! |
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GoldenButterfly
Joined: 31 Mar 2004
Reviews: 32
Location: Wisconsin
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Sun May 09, 2004 11:14 pm
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ah yes...and so the plot thickens!!! I am very much liking the turn this story is taking...finally Fenwick will get caught doing something naughty...right?!? LOL!
More story...soooon! PLease!! |
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AranelMinyatur
Joined: 21 Apr 2004
Reviews: 46
Location: Western Washington State
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Mon May 10, 2004 12:14 am
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 Oh I'm SO happy....a new chapter!!! I hope Cam finds something good to use against Neville and the "git" (I just love that...are you a Red Dwarf fan????)! Anywho....I'm on the edge of my seat...mind racing...wondering 'Will the blonde bimbo come back to bite Eomer in the hiney later??(not literally mind you)' 'What will Cam do with her new toys??' 'When will Ani be free to marry Eomer??' OH I just LOVE this story. I'm going to have to print it out to read again and again when it's finally complete. Bravo my dear...keep the chapters coming!! |
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