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Sorcia
Joined: 16 Jan 2004
Reviews: 80
Location: Gods, Sean in glasses, how dishy
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Mon May 17, 2004 12:49 pm
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Well thanks to your excellent writing and gripping fanfic, I have yet another WIP that I am now adicited to...great.. 
Please, tell me where to sign up to the 'Willing to help drown Fenwick Fanclub'! I have spent three days reading this story...and I don't regret a moment spent! Glad you have picked Eomer and expanded upon his character...I think your characterization is very close to what he 'could' have been(in JRR mind).
So, please, bring on the next chapters...take us to where we can applaude Cam, she has to win 'Best Girlfriend You Could Have In Middle Earth' award!
Anyway...I'm enjoying 
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RonsGal
Joined: 22 Jan 2004
Reviews: 17
Location: Calif
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Mon May 17, 2004 2:40 pm
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Chapter 29! Way to Go Cam!!!
Go Girlfriend! She's as brave as Ani and I'm SOOOO glad to see Fenwick is about to get what he has coming to him! He's the best villian I've ever read about and I myself wish I could have kicked his hiney!
So, go Novedhelion, we've with you all the way to Fenwick's nasty, nasty end! And it can't happen quick enough for me.
And yes, Cam does indeed deserve the Best Girlfriend in Middle Earth award!
Thank you for another fabulous chapter.
Sally |
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Tarfalathwen
Joined: 20 Jan 2004
Reviews: 10
Location: Pennsylvania
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Tue May 18, 2004 3:01 pm
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| What can I say that hasn't been said already? This story is fabulous! It really puts Eomer in a whole new perspective. Every girl should have an Eomer. Where can I place my order??? |
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kwannom
Joined: 08 Jan 2004
Reviews: 67
Location: Brazil
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Tue May 18, 2004 3:50 pm
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Oi Nove!
This next chapter was very intriguing.  I felt worried when I noticed that you would use Cam to seduce Mardil. It seemed that he would never believe her, because she is absolutely loyal to Ani and I feared that the scene would lack in believability. However, you proved that I was wrong. Your talent shone in this scene, when you made Cam fool poor Mardil. It was amazing! The way you logically conduced Cam's reasons felt true. The need of Mardil's body clouds his thoughts. I hope we are able to see the results of Cam actions in the next chapter.
And finally we see Mardil acting like a powerful evil character. Until now, I sensed that he was evil, but sometimes Éomer was too strong and overpowered Mardil. He seemed like a bad fool. He did his little evil things, but he had never put his words into action. Now I see Mardil absolutely hateful and evil and acting like the way he should be. I didn't like him before, but truly threatening Éomer's life - with arrows and everything - earned him my deepest hate. The description of Ani's impotence toward the situation was incredible also, making the emotions in this scene deep and well built.
That scene with Éomer naked and asleep was precious.  ops: I have to confess that I read this part about six times. Ani is the luckiest girl on Earth! I'm drooling until now! I agree that every girl should have an Éomer I'm orderng one too!
Anyway, keep it up! The story is getting better and better and I'm dying to see the ways it is going to take.  |
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StArSpLaSh
Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Wed May 19, 2004 9:14 pm
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Wow! This chapter was just like a movie to me!  You are a fantastic writer! Keep up the good work! Update soon!  |
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ladytinewen
Joined: 13 Apr 2004
Reviews: 15
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Wed May 19, 2004 9:18 pm
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| Go Eomer, go and get her! I love the idea of Eomer puzzling over sand castles You cannot make us wait for long please update soon. |
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AranelMinyatur
Joined: 21 Apr 2004
Reviews: 46
Location: Western Washington State
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Wed May 19, 2004 9:43 pm
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I love the way it's all starting to come together!! It's torture but in a good way! ha! I just devour each new chapter and try to wait patiently for the next one!! I read and re-read this because it's just as good as a movie...would absolutely LOVE to see it filmed in with the others!! Ah well.....back to finding something to do until the next chapter! Hurry hurry hurry!!!!  |
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AzureDragoness
Joined: 11 Jan 2004
Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
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Wed May 19, 2004 9:51 pm
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Ooh ooh ooh! I see much doom and payback in Fenwick's future. God I'm lovin this.....  |
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Thu May 20, 2004 5:51 am
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| Very sweet! Nice bit about Cam... but in the next chappie, could we have a discussion about her "dress" between Cam and Am? Sand-castles...lol! Please update soon! |
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amybethm
Joined: 28 Feb 2004
Reviews: 34
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Thu May 20, 2004 7:12 am
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Eee! I hope this means the net is really closing around Fenwick! However, I can't help but think that he has a few more tricks up his sleeve! If he finds himself backed into a corner, he may do something desperate and might go after Ani or Cam! I'm glad that Amrothos and Eomer now know that they're onto Fenwick, and that Amrothos at least has some details. i hope the planted information bites Fenwick in the rear end!
Maybe the Cosairs will do everyone a favor and throw Fenwick to the fishes! I don't blame Ani for being repulsed- she has a lot more patience and acting ability than I would in the same situation.
I hope Eomer has a plan to intercede, just in case Ani and Cam's scheme backfires somehow. There's always the old "kidnap the princess" plan, too.
I'm glad we got to see her letter. Short but sweet!
Aargh! I hope the next part won't be too far behind. The suspense is getting even more intense! I hope to see them together, without Fenwick in the way, very soon!
Cheers,
Amy B. |
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