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Aramel
Joined: 10 Apr 2004
Reviews: 2
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Thu May 20, 2004 7:14 am
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Oh, look, I spy a new chapter  Thank you ever so much--having that cliffhanger on chapter 29 was torture.  |
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Ania
Joined: 08 Sep 2003
Reviews: 55
Location: Britain
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Thu May 20, 2004 8:09 am
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| I've been reading this for a while now, and the first thing that struck me with this fic was how gripping it was, I can't wait for each oncoming chapter and that's something that you've captured brilliantly with this story. The characters of Anhuil and Eomer are engaging and very well written, their relationship is so touching and you've simply created a wonderful piece of literature here. But at the same time you're captured a poignancy and yearning within the characters, I find that I can really relate to them at times and am particularly joining in their frustration, I can't help longing for them to finally be able to get married. This is a brillaint piece and I can only say, very well done and please post the next chapter soon! |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
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Thu May 20, 2004 10:57 am
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| What is he going to do!??? I hope they'll be able to get that nasty Mardil out of the way, although, it seems as though it will not be an easy task. I love this story! Please update soon I can't wait to find out what Eomer has planned! |
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kinvara
Joined: 18 Feb 2004
Reviews: 58
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Thu May 20, 2004 11:09 am
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| Yeah, very good chapter and i can't believe she has given into Fenwick! That is just in time for my latin exam tomorrow and has at least diverted my mind to something different for a while (goes off into own little dream world)and as always it was a very well written chapter, can't wait for the next! |
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RonsGal
Joined: 22 Jan 2004
Reviews: 17
Location: Calif
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Fri May 21, 2004 11:50 am
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Ani is WAY TOO SMART to give in to Fenwick, she's playing the game to keep him off guard. Very smart indeed.
I LOVED the sand she sent him. How sweet and perfect was that?
This chapter (30) was one of the very best yet! I just loved that Cam & Ani are getting closer to exposing Fenwick, and I also love the interplay between Cam & Am! He's such a sweetheart too... I would like to see them get together also. Can you tell I'm a believer in happy endings?
This story is REALY good and I can't wait for the next chapter!!! |
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eokat
Joined: 27 Jan 2004
Reviews: 31
Location: England
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Sat May 22, 2004 10:40 am
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Hi, what another stunner. Looks like things are starting to hot up, although I don't know what you have got up your sleeve next. Looking forward intenesly to the next. Eokat.   |
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Nienna
Joined: 22 May 2004
Reviews: 24
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Sat May 22, 2004 2:39 pm
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Golly. Have only just discovered fanfic, thanks to a friend of mine who is similarly LotR obsessed. I just want to say I've read this story in major chunks over the last 3 days and can't wait for the climax! 
This is very well written by any fiction standards and I'm completely hooked. I'd be interested to know if the author is American, and whether or not she (I assume?) would want to be aware of the occasional word or phrase used which, to a purely English ear, slightly jar. If so, I'd be happy to give more detailed feedback - but please please don't take this as criticism - I think this is a wonderful story, superbly told and a joy to read. |
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kinvara
Joined: 18 Feb 2004
Reviews: 58
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Wed May 26, 2004 11:38 am
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| Ahhhhh no too too too exciting you can't just leave us like that not nw! What is going to happen? Need more damn it! Plaese update very very soon! Thanx. |
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Ania
Joined: 08 Sep 2003
Reviews: 55
Location: Britain
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Wed May 26, 2004 12:40 pm
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| Very well written action in this chapter, you've got me hooked! I'm on the edge of my seat longing for the next chapter, very well written, you've made it believeable and gripping, excellent as always. |
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amybethm
Joined: 28 Feb 2004
Reviews: 34
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Wed May 26, 2004 12:54 pm
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Okay, now I'm truly going to pass out! This was a splendid chapter, and what a cliffhanger! I'm just going to swoon all over the place when the Rohirrim show up! I assume Ani heard their horns?
I shouldn't be surprised that Fenwick had such a grandiose plan of action, but I was! I'm thinking that Cam's discovery and their planting of information is probably going to set Fenwick's destruction in motion, whether or not the Corsairs succeed in doing his dirty work around the royal family. I don't think they'll forgive him for getting their ships sunk and their crews killed and captured. What a scumbag he is!
I love seeing Eomer ride to the rescue, and his rallying cry to ride to their "future queen"? Sigh.
I hope the next chapter is coming soon! This one was incredibly suspenseful and full of great action and intrigue. Well done!
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Amy B.  |
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