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AzureDragoness
Joined: 11 Jan 2004
Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
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Wed May 26, 2004 2:57 pm
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*muffled squak* It ends there??? ARGH! That is NOT a good place for a cliffie. There had better be more soon, capice?  |
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AranelMinyatur
Joined: 21 Apr 2004
Reviews: 46
Location: Western Washington State
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Wed May 26, 2004 3:51 pm
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! oh that is just SO cruel!!!  The wait will be unbearable until the next chapter!!! What an AWESOME chapter!! Edge of my seat, squealing outloud, FANTASTIC!!! More more more!!! WOW!  |
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RonsGal
Joined: 22 Jan 2004
Reviews: 17
Location: Calif
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Wed May 26, 2004 5:43 pm
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OMG. That was by far the best chapter yet! And thats saying alot... as Sam would say!
This chapter was wonderful on so many levels... Fenwick showing us that he's a bigger %&$#@ snake than we already thought he was. Cam & Am.... why I almost cried when he rushed off from her, and YES, Cam should have told him she loved him right then! And Eomer with all his ways of knowing just when to arrive... I PRAY that what she heard is his horns, or better yet, his "Riders of the Mark.... " speech, it was perfect! And the "to your future Queen" part, that was wonderful!!!
Another excellent chapter Novedhelion, you out did yourself this time!!!
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Daeuial
Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 44
Location: NYC
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Wed May 26, 2004 9:48 pm
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Nooo! Wicked cliffhanger! But I love this story, and I'll live. I think. But really, why didn't Homegirl [Ani] just take the proof she had to her father? Admittedly, this is much more exciting than Fenwick just being banished from Dol Amroth, but still, it's like reading Harry Potter--you just wish the protagonist would get a clue and speak to an authority figure for once. And yet, this does not detract from the story at all, it just makes it even more tense. So really, I'm not complaining, I'm biting my fingernails and cursing at my computer screen in an oddly expressed delight. No wonder the tenants think I'm weird. Anyway, it was another great chapter in an immensely entertaining story, and I'm pining away for the next chapter already.  |
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brownsuga
Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 9
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Wed May 26, 2004 10:05 pm
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Oh My!!! 
All i can say is WOW and please update  |
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Thu May 27, 2004 12:16 am
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Hurray for Eomer to the rescue!!
I love your plot, your storyline... ^_^ God, I'd make a real lousy editor at the rate of how I review people's works here... lol... oh, well.
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Kementari1
Joined: 23 Jan 2004
Reviews: 7
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Thu May 27, 2004 1:19 am
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Oooh, that was just fabulous, dear Bard!!! You have me on the edge of my seat, and now we know you can write romance, drama, ACTION -- you're a "bard of all trades"!!! May the Valar grant you LOTS OF FREE TIME TO WRITE, cuz I gotta have the next chapter soon, like yesterday-soon. Kudos to Riyallyn the beta, too -- what a team y'all are!
Looking forward to hearing the goosebump-illiciting sound of Rohirrim horns (I hope!),
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Tarfalathwen
Joined: 20 Jan 2004
Reviews: 10
Location: Pennsylvania
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Thu May 27, 2004 12:31 pm
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| Another FABULOUS chapter! Very exciting, flows well, and extremely well written. Can't wait for more!!! |
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eokat
Joined: 27 Jan 2004
Reviews: 31
Location: England
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Fri May 28, 2004 2:26 am
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| Just when I think we are getting near to end, you come up with something else spectacular, I am away on hols soon so hope to have another chapter ready for when I come home. Eokat. |
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Nessa21
Joined: 28 May 2004
Reviews: 4
Location: Calgary, Canada
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Fri May 28, 2004 3:58 pm
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I love this story so far! I can't wait until your done! I really don't like Fenwick....I think Eomer is probably my new favorite character! Thanks!  |
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