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Concetta

Joined: 22 Mar 2004 Reviews: 25
Location: Maryland, USA
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Tue Jun 08, 2004 3:43 pm
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WOW . . . . That chapter was SO totally thrilling and gripping. I was on the edge of my seat the entire time. They should make your story into a movie, seriously. ABSOLUTELY AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I let out a giant sigh of relief at the end of the chapter, too when Éomer said "it's over." I hope Amrothros is alright!
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RonsGal

Joined: 22 Jan 2004 Reviews: 17
Location: Calif
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Tue Jun 08, 2004 3:58 pm
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Chapter 32... WOW. That is honestly all I can say. Just WOW.
This chapter is SOOO good. The way it goes back and forth, its like the movies were done, it brings you to the height of each scene, then switches you back to another part of the story! Wonderfully done! Right from the very first paragraph, when Eomer and his men ride into the city... I could almost SEE it happening!
Fabulous chapter! Is it any wonder that this story has OVER 10,000 hits!
Thank You, Thank You, Thank You!
Sally |
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AzureDragoness

Joined: 11 Jan 2004 Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
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Tue Jun 08, 2004 4:04 pm
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He's DEAD!!!!!! *angels start singing* GLORY, HALELUJIAH! Oh, life just doesn't get any better..... wait, I forgot, they have to get married Thank you so, SOOOO much for this update-- can you tell I liked it? |
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Ninde
Joined: 25 Mar 2004 Reviews: 25
Location: Headed for Middle Earth
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Tue Jun 08, 2004 9:09 pm
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Yippeee...Fenwick is dead...alright way to go..."Celebrate good times...COME ON"...ahh oops, sorry..got carried away there..so sorry he is dead (NOT)now, maybe Eomer and Ani can get it together  |
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amybethm
Joined: 28 Feb 2004 Reviews: 34
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Tue Jun 08, 2004 10:26 pm
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Woo hooo!
I can only hope the cliff and the sharp rocks did the job. Eomer had better make good on his promise to marry her pronto- hey! They already have all the guests and so forth in place. Assuming most of the buildings are still standing, and the food hasn't been too pillaged, they have all the essentials for the wedding in place! I would love to see a big party back in Rohan with a "Do Virgins Taste Better?" sing-along. Or maybe they can shock the proper Gondorians with a rendition here.
Semi-seriously, this was a fantastic chapter. Lots of action, clearly described. I loved seeing the women get some good moments there! I looove how proud Eomer is that his woman can kick ass! Poor Amrothos and Cam! He has to be fine, right? Gulp. Cam's father is really appealing, even with only a brief appearance. He's a strong man, a competent leader and a loving father. It _sounds_ like it really is over, and hopefully everyone can tie up the loose ends and move on.
Lots of great little moments, like Imrahil recognizing the look in Eomer's eyes when he's told his men are dead, and Ani in the hall with Caerwyn- sniffle!
Please tell me there's racy wedding night footage coming up relatively soon!
Wonderful and you really need to writer faster. Kidding. I'm kidding. I look forward to the next part with great anticipation.
Cheers,
Amy B. |
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Gwenevere

Joined: 06 Apr 2004 Reviews: 25
Location: United States
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Tue Jun 08, 2004 10:26 pm
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| Props to Riyallyn for the Amrothos and Cam interaction: I really enjoyed it. The wicked witch is dead! Er... Fenwick is dead! Excellent chapter- descriptions were wonderful (had to read it twice so I could savor). Keep it up! |
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Losille

Joined: 04 Mar 2004 Reviews: 13
Location: Phoenix, AZ, USA
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Tue Jun 08, 2004 11:23 pm
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FENWICK IS DEAD!!!!! 
That is all I have to say (and you both are wonderful writers and I only wish this story could go on forever!)  |
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kwannom
Joined: 08 Jan 2004 Reviews: 67
Location: Brazil
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Wed Jun 09, 2004 11:03 am
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I bow to you once more, what a terrific chapter! WOWOWOW 
I love all this action, we were able to see the characters that we learned to love and what they are doing and feeling. I thought you were not going to kill Fenwick though. 
He is so evil that he should be locked up in a prison for all eternity. Only then he would pay for his betrayal. 
Well, thinking it over, I couldn’t say that Mardil is dead without reading that his corpse was found. Let’s see what you are up to in the next chapter.
Finally Ani and Éomer can be together! 
Poor Cam is the one having problems with her beloved now. When I read that Amrothos had been wounded, I truly felt sorry for Cam . Anyway, I love reading fanfictions that evoke true emotions in me, and yours is one of the best examples.
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Riyallyn

Joined: 21 Jan 2004 Reviews: 5
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Wed Jun 09, 2004 11:24 am
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Just a quick note from the beta.
I am so glad you all seem to be liking the story. I just wanted to say how much Nove has put into this, and how very proud i am of her. I know she gets e-mails on occasion begging to know when the next chapter will be posted and such, all I know is how excited I am to come here and read reviews. They are a lot of fun, and this group has a most excellent, though somewhat twisted, sense of humor. They are so much fun! Thank you so much!
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RonsGal

Joined: 22 Jan 2004 Reviews: 17
Location: Calif
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Wed Jun 09, 2004 11:54 am
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Hear! Hear! Riyallyn... dear beta! I'll drink to that!!!
Having met both these women, I can tell you they BOTH do a fantastic job, it is for sure a team effort. They work into the wee hours every night making this wonderful story more and more wonderful every chapter!
So if there's kudo's to go out, they go tot BOTH you women.
And the fact that there was over 120 hits in 24 hours just goes to show you, your fan base is growing all the time!
So... now that I've schmoosed you both... when's chapter 33 going to be up????
Sally |
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