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Artanis
Joined: 08 Mar 2004 Reviews: 19
Location: USA
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Fri Jun 25, 2004 1:54 am
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I've been an avid reader since chapter 3, and felt it was time I review! This is without a doubt one of the BEST stories I have ever read! Whenever I watch the movie now I think of how your story fits into it. While I can't wait for more, I don't want this story to be over! I hoping for a sequel(s)
(I think I'm just about as excited reading about Cam and Amrothos, as I am about Eomer and Ani! Great job to you and Riyallyn!) |
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Novedhelion

Joined: 04 Sep 2003 Reviews: 42
Location: NC
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Fri Jun 25, 2004 6:32 am
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OK...Ok...For all of you wanting to know...Book 2 is in the works. It may read a little differently, but there will be a sequel.
Feel better?
Thanks for all the reviews! Keep 'em coming!
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kwannom
Joined: 08 Jan 2004 Reviews: 67
Location: Brazil
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Sun Jun 27, 2004 12:33 am
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Oi Nove!
Well, it may have taken me a while to review your magnificent work, but at least now it is here.
First of all, congratulations for your nomination! As soon as the voting begins, I’ll ran to vote for you. This work certainly deserves it. 
Continuing… I was doing the “terrible sacrifice” of reading your chapter again heheh so I could write a decent review.
There is nothing much to say, only the usual adjectives like “perfect, well written, emotional, poetic, wonderful timing” heheh Your fiction is awesome, you and Riya certainly make an incredible team.
However, in this chapter something funny happened while I was reading it. Everything was going so right - Ani was with Éomer, Cam had Amrothos alive, Mardil was dead - that I began to wonder that something bad would happen in every paragraph that I read.
After every sentence I expected to read something that would tell me that the blonde girl who “slept” with Éomer would appear claiming to be pregnant and he would have to marry her. That would take a lot more chapters to solve this situation and prove her wrong.
The other thing I thought was of Mardil coming back from the dead. He wouldn’t have truly died and he would appear during Ani and Éomer’s wedding to have the last fight.
Ok, I know that I am being paranoiac here… That is what I get for wanting them to be together and happy so much. I began to imagine things lol
Abraços, amiga! (hugs, my friend!)
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rossui
Joined: 17 Apr 2004 Reviews: 10
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Sun Jun 27, 2004 2:33 am
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This is just outstanding. You have captured Eomer as I imagine him, beyond the limited portrayal of him in the books and movie. I hated to see it end, but am so pleased there will be a sequel.
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Aenigmatic
Joined: 07 Apr 2004 Reviews: 10
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Tue Jun 29, 2004 11:25 am
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*cues grand sountrack that bursts from orchestra that normally comes when a romantic movie ends*
Do I have anymore to say? Only the complaint that Camwethrin and Amrothos are given too attention. ;D |
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amybethm
Joined: 28 Feb 2004 Reviews: 34
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Tue Jun 29, 2004 12:22 pm
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Woo hoo, they're married They're married! *Happy dance!*
i love how Eomer dove right in there for the kiss at the end! Ha! And Imrahil's quip: "This is not a loan!"- both very funny and poignant! He knows he's saying goodbye to his daughter, but at least she's going to be happy and loved. Sigh.
I hope you write Cam and Amrothos' wedding in the sequel! I'm very curious to see how Ani will be treated, returning as a dignitary as Lothiriel, Queen of the Mark, and not just Cam's best friend and Imrahil's youngest. That would be very interesting!
Just how long are Eomer and Ani going to last at the wedding feast before one of them drags the other off to their bedroom? And will they be able to keep their hands in relatively polite locations on each other's bodies?
A lovely, romantic conclusion to this very satisfying story! I greatly look forward to the epilogue and I'm very glad you'll be continuing their adventures in another story! I'm sure married life and life as new monarchs will be very interesting and will have a few bumps along the way.
Cheers,
Amy B. |
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Elita
Joined: 27 Feb 2004 Reviews: 1
Location: UK
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Tue Jun 29, 2004 12:26 pm
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| I've been reading this from the get go but have yet to add a review (my bad). This has to be one of the most enthralling fan fictions I've ever read; reading it it's almost as if I'm there - you really bring the story to life. A lot of fics falter towards the end but if anything yours has become all the more gripping as time passes. I'm absolutely devastated that the end is nigh, looking forward to the epilogue and perhaps a sequel, please God a sequel! Congratulations on a job well done! |
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TXFaramirFangirl
Joined: 27 Jun 2004 Reviews: 11
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Tue Jun 29, 2004 1:49 pm
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| I have no critiques . . .this is a first! One of my favorites on the archive! |
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AranelMinyatur
Joined: 21 Apr 2004 Reviews: 46
Location: Western Washington State
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Tue Jun 29, 2004 2:37 pm
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What a beautiful wedding!!!! I love the words to the ceremony!! The gift of the hands!! Ohhhhhhhh....made me cry! I love the kiss at the end too!! *SWOON* This is the best story on this site!! I can't wait for the epilogue! I will try to remain patient. Thanks again for all the fun! |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 269
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Tue Jun 29, 2004 8:05 pm
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**JOY!!!!!** They're married! I was a little worried when Mardil was mentioned, I'm SO happy he wasn't around to ruin their wedding celebration. Although, I suspect, that he MAY be lurking around...somewhere. And what happened to his fluncky, Neville? Ohhh, I am keeping my fingers crossed for a sequel ***crosses fingers and hopes***
That was a fantastic chapter (like all previous ones, of course!). Their wedding vows were absolutely beautiful, and I admit to whipping out the tissue more than once. I can't wait for the epilogue...all of Eomer's teasing had better pay off!
Wonderful chapter, wonderful story...loved it, loved it, loved it!!!!! Thanks for writing such a great story. AND. I hope to read more....soon, I hope
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