Reviews for "Trust To Hope"

Mon Mar 15, 2004 6:20 pm

Wow... I absolutely love how you fleshed out Ani, and Eomer's one of my favorites too. I'm so glad someone finally got to punch Fenwick! I can't wait for the next part...

Scarlett

Thu Mar 18, 2004 3:46 pm

Such a GREAT story! I can't wait for more... and hopefully Ani's father will overhear a conversation between Ani and that *** Fenwick! The descriptions are so beautiful and the story is truly captivating. Star-crossed lovers = my favorite! For a while, I was scared that they wouldn't end up together, but once the message of how strong their love was for one another... well, they had to end up together - no other options.

You may want to go back and review once becuase not all the elvish is always translated, for example the conversation Ani has with Legolas, Prince of Mirkwood at the ball.

I'm enraptured by this story and I can't wait for more! Very Happy smiley face

Thu Mar 18, 2004 4:17 pm

I know I've reviewed this story before but ..... it just keeps getting better!!!

Thanks Novedhelion!

Thu Mar 18, 2004 9:57 pm

OOPS! **smacks forehead**

Chapter Nineteen was thrown up in a hurry...can't believe I forgot the translations! And out of over 200 hits since I put it up, you are the first to point it out! Sorry - will go back and do that right away!

Thanks again for the review...I always appreciate it when folk take the time to write and let me know what they think!

Novedhelion

Fri Mar 19, 2004 4:38 pm

Wonderful. Nove has given Eomer a personality! He was stiff in the book and movie and now he has life. Thanks for writing such an excellent story. Can't wait to find out how we get to the marriage.

Fri Mar 19, 2004 9:07 pm

And the beta walkes around highly chagrined. I've failed in my job. I forgot about the translations as well. My apologies for failing in my solemn duty to make sure Nove looks good. Ok, didn't fail, she looks good all on her own, but still.

Have to admit, I love being the beta, I'll endeavor to do better.

And this post was written by Riyallyn the beta, not by Novedhelion.

Sat Mar 20, 2004 12:49 am

I love this story!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON Very Happy smiley face

Sat Mar 20, 2004 6:17 pm

You know, I was riveted by the action I didn't notice the lack of translations! I could pretty much figure what was going on. Maybe I've picked up more Elvish than I knew! Also, I figured it was like one of those Nineteenth-Century novels with passages in either Latin or French that aren't translated, mostly because the assumption was that readers spoke both languages anyway, so I figured it was an homage to that style! Wink smiley face

Cheers,
Amy B.
like everyone else is waiting not-so-patiently for the next chapter!

Sun Mar 21, 2004 5:02 am

Well.... an intermission... not what I was patiently (not) waiting for I must admit. Anyway, I'll go back to read the re-writes, but please, please hurry! Wink smiley face

Mon Mar 22, 2004 1:59 am

I ABSOLUTELY ADORE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It is so creative, your portrayal of Lothírel is awesome. I especially thought it was funny when he was kissing her and he was called and he murmured "go away" and I cheered when he busted Fenwick in the jaw! The guy was so asking for it. Éomer's portrayal is also seriously sexy, good job! Very Happy smiley face

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