Reviews for "Trust To Hope"

Mon Apr 05, 2004 7:32 pm

Okay, let's try this again. My review got lost somehow.

Yay! They've found "hope" gain! Yay! I'm relieved, but they clearly have quite a battle still ahead of them. I loved all the flirting and kissing in this chapter. That Eomer is quite a kisser. i could see a more overt "stable scene" in their future Smile smiley face

; great innuendo and playfulness in this scene.

I think Ani is right about the gossip- they'll be the talk of the city by the morning. There were too many interested eavesdroppers and observers around. Then they rode out unescorted- gasp! This is likely to officially start a scandal.

I love the little detail that Eomer is still carrying her handkerchief. Of course he would be, but it's a great detail to remind the readers about, and it enhances Eomer's romantic side. The scene at the burial mound was particularly well done. It illustrated both the cost of this war to Middle Earth, and to these two characters in particular, and Ani and Eomer's strength and resolve. Ani would make a magnificent Queen of Rohan! She has seen the cost of war and dealt with the aftermath firsthand, and been strong and calm in the face of it.

I look forward to the next part eagerly!

Cheers,
Amy B.

Tue Apr 06, 2004 10:26 pm

I already read it. Bounce smiley face

It was perfect again!

Don't worry about the smack on the butt thing.

Things are getting hot for Éomer, huh? Kiss smiley face

I'm greatful that Fenwick did not show his claws in this chapter. But if he does in the next one, I'm sure that Éomer is going to bit the crap out of him Laughing smiley face

As the Rohirric King always says, he is not a gentleman heheheh. And Fendwick, as coward as he is, will have to run away and hide. Hiding behind the sofa smiley face

Tchau!

Wed Apr 07, 2004 12:12 am

Wow! Will people really write you complaining about the smack? man ... it made ME feel all tingly! Wink smiley face

Love this story. I drop everything to come read each new chapter. It's excellently balanced -- not too slow, not too fast, good action/exposition blend, etc. -- and Eomer! He's exactly as I'd wish him to be. Sigh ...

Thanks! Can't wait for more!

Wed Apr 07, 2004 5:54 am

Wow....what a great chapter..I LOVE the smack..I am getting ready to go to work at a job thatI really don't want to be at, (thank the Valar it's only a part time job)...thinking of those two and what is in storefor them will help me get through the day...Hurry and update.... Wave smiley face

Wed Apr 07, 2004 10:20 am

You know, some people _like_ getting spanked. *whistling casually*

Yowza! Can you say "sexual tension"? I'm glad they got a good kiss and a little bit of a grope (and a smack) before they got caught. If Cam had any illusions about what was going on between the King and Ani, she should now be pretty clear they're an "item".

I love how they outsmarted Fenwick in the tent! That dude has nooo imagination! I hope someday he makes the mistake of calling Eomer a "peasant" or some such thing within earshot of Imarahil and/or one of his sons! I doubt Eomer cares the slightest what Fenwick thinks or says of him, but others might find it offensive on Eomer's behalf.

I'm glad they get Galadriel's endorsement! If what she says is true, the scales should be tipping in their favor soon. I'm hoping Eomer proves himself worthy once and for all to Ani's family, and that Fenwick makes a couple of stupid mistakes, not in front of just Ani or Eomer.

Totally addicted to this story!

Cheers,
Amy B. Shocked smiley face

Wed Apr 07, 2004 1:21 pm

I'm loving this story. The moments with Celeborn and Galadriel rocked! Update soon.

Wed Apr 07, 2004 3:18 pm

Another fabulous chapter! Can't wait to read more. I love Éomer and Lothíriel's banter.

Wed Apr 07, 2004 9:58 pm

Well I admit it has been a really long time since I've reviewed... I'm so sorry dear! I really like where you've taken both the story and the characters... but I swear that bloody Fenwick prick gets to be more of a ass as time goes on. If Lothí or Éomer don't get rid of him soon, I swear I will! I'm REALLY surprised at how lenient she's been so far, considering her personality in the begining of the story... but then, she's a princess and has class...where I'd be one o' those busty tavern girls who'd take a swing at him! Laughing smiley face

You know best...I just hope he gets what he deserves! Twisted Evil smiley face

Fri Apr 09, 2004 3:29 pm

Love the emotion between Eomer and Lothiriel. It will be a hard journey back to Edoras, what with the pending funeral, plus having Lothiriel so near and yet so far, PLUS having that obnoxiou you know who still sticking his oar in everywhere. Still loving this and looking forward to the next one. Eokat. Very Happy smiley face

Sun Apr 11, 2004 1:07 am

this story is really starting to drag. i was so amazing for the first ten chapters, but now I almost feel as if the author is procrastinating in ending the story. the chapters just aren't as enjoyable to read anymore, and it's almost becoming a chore for me to keep reading. i seriously though the sotry would have been over by chapter fifteen at the latest, but it's getting so dragged out.

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