Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
Wed Jul 21, 2010 7:10 am
How lovely to find this over my lunch, having read the rest some months ago - quite a long time after it was written. If this is the last of it, it will still suffice. If there should ever be more, it would be welcomed by this reader, at least.
ellisk
Joined: 24 Jan 2004 Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
Sat Feb 19, 2011 10:05 pm
I just found this last chapter. This is one of my favorite stories and I was so happy to see that you posted what happened to them. This was a wonderful and very fitting ending to the story. Tender and tragic at once. Outstanding writing and characterization. I loved it!
StarTae
Joined: 05 Oct 2017 Reviews: 1
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Thu Oct 05, 2017 12:45 am
I would have loved to see this story developed more fully. The pace at the beginning was full and lingering while the last two chapters felt rushed and disconnected from the others.
The idea was beautiful.